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Warm up

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Poem

He's silly, he's funny, he's clumsy, and laughs, at me.

Summer Vacation

Summer has come Leaves dress up as dark green, I'm so excited I can burst out of school, Anybody adores summer My compass for love for summer is true. 

Warm-up

Matching- 8 seconds

Quiz1- 7/10

Quiz 2- 6/10

Q: 1. The following pattern in a line is an example of which meter? **- / - / - / - / -

2. The following line is an example of which meter? The curfew tolls the knell of parting day 3. The following lines exemplify which predominant meter? ([|Click]to hear them read (118K). ** code   Nor law nor duty bade me fight,    Nor public men, nor cheering crowds.    A lonely impulse of delight

code Drove to this tumult in the clouds. 4. The following lines are an example of which meter? code O young Lochinvar is come out of the west,

code Through all the wide Border his steed was the best. 5. The following line is an example of which meter? The will of my most seeming-virtuous queen 6. The following lines are predominantly in which meter? code Go, and catch a falling star, Get with child a mandrake root,

code Tell me, where all past years are. . . 7. The following lines are an example of which meter? code Happy the man whose wish and care

code A few paternal acres bound 8. In the following lines which kind of foot predominates? (I am assuming that the opening words are stressed "//Do// you" and not "Do //you//.)" code Do you remember an inn, Miranda?

code Do you remember an inn? 9. The following lines are examples of which meter? code When to the sessions of sweet silent thought

code I summon up remembrance of things past

10. The following lines are an example of which meter? code But I hung on like death.

code Such waltzing was not easy.

A: 4, 2, 1, 6, 2, 3, 2, 5, 4, 6

Remaining Chapters

Presentations

Emily- tanka Its origin is Japan It is over 1300 years old

Chloe In alphabetic order Special form of acrostic poem

Will Quatrain Has alternative rhymes Has four lines

Christina K Ode from of a lyric poem It is serious and considers nature

Yaerin S from of French poetry 10-15 lines

Hyundo Found Poem use other sources to changing them to something different Altered by taking out or adding word or phrases

Justin Y Poem that describes pictures Poems are done very dramatically

Christopher Choi Each line shares the same meter It describes pain or sadness

Hanna couplet Rhymes They are two lines stanza

Justin P (my own) abab rhyme format first line repeated in the last line

Chanel Tells a story second and fourth rhymes

Christina - Found Poem Resulting poem can be treated or untreated treated is changed

Brian found in Europe lytic poem

Clara Created by Afaa Michael Weaver three stanzas

Tercet any three lines of poem can be rhymed or unrhymed

Inae- sonnet lyric poem William Shakespeare wrote sonnets

Pantoum Presentation

Warm-up

May 26th Verb Tense Score 9/10

HW May 25th

Couplet - two lines of verse, usually in the same meter and joined by rhyme, that form a unit. Tercet- a set or group of three lines of verse rhyming together or connected by rhyme with an adjacent tercet. Quatrain-a stanza of four lines, esp. one having alternate rhymes. Sonnet-a poem of fourteen lines using any of a number of formal rhyme schemes, in English typically having ten syllables per line. Ballad- a poem narrating a story in short stanzas.

First Ten chapters of Shiva's Fire

What If.... What if everyday was a holiday? I might play all day. What if I was the smartest person on Earth? I could go to a good university and get a good job. What if I was the richest person in the world? I would I would build a huge mansion. What if these wishes actually come true?

Mask I am a dog yellow as a bar of gold. I run around the yard I speed through the park I can make a person feel better. I can be a beloved pet I am a dog

I can't Write a Poem Forget it You must be kidding My dog ate the poem. I just came. I have a stomach ache. I need more sleep. I lost all my pencil. I can't write anything without it. I spraned my wrist. I can't print the poem on my macbook. I can't write a poem. Time's up? Uh oh! All I have is a dumb list of excuses. You like it? Really? No kidding. Thanks a lot. Would you like to see another one?

Diamonte Poems May 12th Happiness Bright, Friendly, Hospitable, Delighting, Caring, Helping, Blithe, Jubilant Distressing, Awkward, Dark, Cheerless, Bitter, Painful, Melancholy, Sad

Haiku Word Choice Evaluation

Spring encountered Korea Everyone rushing out with delight Birds chirp cats meow

I would give her 4 out of 5, because her language and phrasing are natural, effective, and appropriate for the audience. However, she lacked of those words. Examples are encounter and delight.

Alluring sky Fantastic new year spring day How adorable sight!

I would give her 5 out of 5 for this because she used striking words and phrases often catch the reader's eye and linger in the reader's mind. They were such as alluring, adorable. ** Springtime in Korea, cold breeze and warm breeze, beware of spring colds **

I would give her 3 out of 5 because she used familiar words and phrases communicate but rarely capture the reader's imagination. Examples are cold, warm, colds.  ** I love spring time because, Birds chirping, nice to hear, warm sun, nice feeling. **

I would give her 3 because she used words and phrases that are functional with only one or two fine moments. For example, nice and warm does not last in the memory.

2 Haikus

1. The spring is coming Fruits ripe, flowers bloom again To welcome us all

2. Bugs and rain come back, but everyone welcomes the good old warm springtime

p.730 Critical Thinking #1-5

1. I think she followed him even though she had been agreed to be married because she was forced to marry someone she didn't want to, Also, she liked him and thought there would be no need to stay behind. 2. I think the female like him, but the male disliked him. 3. He is very faithful in love, trust, and loyalty. 4. No, because the woman was supposed to marry someone else. 5. I think he is very loyal and courageous.

P. 755 Critical Thinking

1. I think the mood of the "Seal" would be very vivacious and lively, and also enthusiastic, since it zooms and swims in water very forcefully and quickly. 2. "The Pasture" mentions chores as a very pleasant thing to do. The image is given so because it mentions so many positive things you can see, do, and also enjoy while doing chores, such as enjoying seeing the cute little calf. Also, it makes it even more persuasive by telling the reader to come with him. 3.I think the "you" in the audience is us, since it is talking to the reader in a first person perspective.I think "you" in Seal in addressing is the audience because it talking to the audience and makes you feel as if you are there. 4.If it became shark instead of a seal, it would have more of a ferocious, a scary feeling. Also, you wouldn't feel the friendlyness of a seal anymore, but you would have more of a wilder feeling. 5. In both poems, the similarity is that they both show positive and good things about their subject, such as an energetic seal, and fun chores, that may make you see and do many other good things you'll enjoy. Also, they both talk to the audience.

3 facts about Langston Hughes

He was raised by his grandmother He started writing poetry in highschool One of his famous poem is "The Negro Speaks of Rivers."

Anger curse, mad, furious Your anger is a horror to all of us, Your madness is terror towards all of us.

Earth Poem

No matter how cold or hot, Nor too big and boring, It is still our Home, our shelter Our planet and our responsibility Pick up a piece of trash, Turn off the water, And just quietly and little by little, Change Earth.

Comment on the Poetry Slam

I think I enjoyed it very much. However, I was disappointed by the general information, instead of specific details. However, it included easy and fun examples that helped me understand the hard concept. Also, I think it could have been better if it was longer, with more examples, more information about the poetry slam. Also, I liked it because it had many people's comments.

Short Story Reading Assignment 4/22



Riddle Poem

Fast, I am like a cheetah, Slow, I come slowly with the sun in the morning.

Endless, I am like cells, Limited, I am in the dark

Invisible, I am unseen in the day. Special, I stand out in the dark.

What am I?

Answer: Light

Self portrait

Justin's self portrait

My face is like an egg. Round, big, and a munched paper mache, but still sees, smells and hears. My toes are like group of ants. Small, thin, and weak but strong when they work together. My hands are like tools, rusted, old, and large, but feels, grabs and take all I want. My bag is old and torn, but carries everything I want and like. My heart holds happinesss that is yellow as banana. I live in I'Park.

Notes on Blues

The blues is an American musical genre borne out of hard times Blues can be happy or sad It makes the listener feel the heartfelt emotion Blues have many repetitive lines There are many rhymes in blues Blues are usually 12 beat bar, which means it has the beat of 12.

Poem Warmup

April 8th hw

free verse- poetry that doesn’t rhyme or have a regular meter 1st person point of view- literature written from the point of I or me. 3rd person point of view- literature written from the point of a third person analogy a comparison between two things, typically on the basis of their structure and for the purpose of explanation or clarification allegory- a story, poem, or picture that can be interpreted to reveal a hidden meaning, typically a moral or political one alliteration;the occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words. allusionan expression designed to call something to mind without mentioning it explicitly; an indirect or passing reference climax of a novel:the most intense, exciting, or important point of something; a culmination or apex foreshadowing: be a warning or indication of (a future event
 * biography an account of someone's life written by someone else
 * character trait;the traits or characteristics of a person or character in the literature.
 * fable a short story, typically with animals as characters, conveying a moral.
 * fiction literature in the form of prose, esp. short stories and novels, that describes imaginary events and people.
 * flashback; a scene in a movie, novel, etc., set in a time earlier than the main story :

Analogy Presentation

Evaluation for Christina K's writing gym writing

I would give Christina 5 out of 5 for voice. She talked to the reader and showed, not tell. I would give her this because 5a, she connected strongly with the audience with engaging language. I would give her 5 out of 5 for word choice because she used striking words such as bewilderment.

March 20 I Juan de Pareja Report



March 12th evaluation on voice

I would give myself 4 out of 5 because I talk to the reader and connect myself to the topic. For the support and example, I actually put my experiences and put myself in the essay, however, I failed to persuade the reader about my topic. For example, "Sometimes, jealousy can lead you to a fight or cause hatred for your friend." This sentence talks to the reader but fails to persuade them. This is why I would give a 4 out of 5 for voice.

March 8th 5 paragraph essay

Through their journey towards their friendship, heavy troubles rolled upon the two people. What is friendship anyway? Friendship is the state of being a person whom one knows, likes, and trusts.  Let’s face it. We can’t have a life without a single conflict with your close people. Friendship can be anywhere, tough, very tight, loose, and even broken. Well, what cause a friendship to sink and cracked? There are importantly three reasons. You must always respect each other although they are the closes friend of yours. If you do not, sometimes it may cause misunderstanding or the other person might feel offended. Second, it is the jealousy towards your friends. Third, backstabbing and betrayal will also fail a friendship. These are the three components that cause friendship to fail.

The first factor that can break down a friendship is disrespect to friends. No matter how close you and your friend is, if you cross the border and say mean things, hit them, annoy them, the other person might be angry, or even misunderstand. For example, if you keep saying jokes that might sound offensive, the other person might think you no longer care about them anymore. Also, if you say these cruel jokes, the other person might be offended by it, creating an argument, which might even end up no longer being friends anymore. No one likes to be called names you don’t like, even for a joke, and it isn’t funny to them especially when you are very rude to them. This is why disrespect can damage friendship.

The second factor is jealousy. Jealousy may cause you to become better than the other, and that is not what a friend is there for. That is not the only thing that jealousy can do to your friendship. ,Sometimes, jealousy can lead you to a fight or cause hatred for your friend. For example, if your friend shows off their new MacBook and won’t let you see, or touch, you would lose your loyalty towards them and also feel defeated. This makes a crack in the friendship. Jealousy is another component that makes your friendship fails.

The third factor is betrayal, or back-stabbing. One thing sure about back-stabbing is that the friendship and the trust you have built on will collapse in such an instant. For example, if you played a game together in the cafeteria and got caught, an example of betrayal is when you say, “I didn’t play it. I just tried to stop him.” From then on, the friend won’t trust you anymore, feeling back-stabbed, and thinking of you as a liar, and a traitor. This will make him or her lose loyalty towards you. Betrayal and lying also gets you a reputation of a traitor and a liar, and you might have a conflict about your lies. These are the reasons why betrayal might cause a conflict.

Friendship is the state of being friends and being people you can be comfortable, and provide companionship. However, no matter how close and best friends you are, you would at least have a conflict once in a while. Betrayal, jealousy, and disrespect to your friend are the components that might cause a conflict. These are the factors why conflicts happen between friends.

Chapt 8. 3 questions, 3 vocab (define and sentence) and a 3 sentence summary of the main events that happened in each chapter.

3Qs 1.As years past by, master painted portraits of whom? 2.Where was Juan always at when painting the king? 3. Who is Paquita?

Vocab rendezvous- an agreement between two or more persons to meet at a certain time and place- We had a rendezvous to meet in the park. tippet- scarf, usually of fur or wool, for covering the neck -The tippet was her fashion highlight. consternation-a sudden, alarming amazement or dread that results in utter confusion; dismay.-We were in consternation and didn't realize what was going on.

Summarization: After several years has past, Master continued to draw portraits of kings, the officers, and the royalties. At the same time, many people come to become his apprentice. Juan Bautista del Mazo came to visit master, but he fell in love with Pasquita.

Feb. 24th Vocab hw

apprehension:anxiety;fear His apprehension of getting caught by a teacher made him stop.

conscientiously: honorably;carefully He conscientiously changed the test answer after looking at his cheating paper.

exquisite: beautiful;of high quality She was fascinated by Juan Carreno de Miranda's exquisite painting.

haughty:arrogant;proud Her haughty attitude against the audience made him have an odious reputation.

intermittent:periodic; on and off The intermittent plan was finally canceled.

intrigue:secret plot The people who was involved in the intrigue Valkyrie was later murdered.

meticulous:detail-oriented;trembling The small detailed and meticulous skills ended him up with his best work.

tremulous: quivering;trembling He was tremulous is cold and fear after being lost in the dark.

trepidation: nervousness; uncertainty His trepidation and the unsureness of making the risky decision failed him.

Emotion Recipe Feb 23rd emotion recipe for anger

ingredients whinning sister a pair of smelly shoes tattle-tale lagging computer 3 nagging teachers mom telling what to do piled up hw 6 teaspoons of crushed hagwons lack of sleep other stress

First, mix in your 3 cups of smelly shoes, a tattle tale classmate. This amount will get you started. Second, also add your lagging computer and nagging teachers. If you are not satified, add in mom telling what you do. Also, put in some homework and crushed hagwons. Bake it in lack of sleep. You are almost done. There! If you want some more anger, sprinkle some whinning sister. The amount depends on how much you want. Lastly for a final touch, eat it with other stress. The amount might vary for every person. Caution:Too much of these ingredients may end you up in a cell in a mental hospital.

Feb.4th painter biography [| Juan de Carreno de Miranda.pptx]