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 6-08-09 summer break poem  Summer break is like my best friend. Summer break gives me fun to my life. We will memorize the Piper Pepper peter Packer song Also Will will feel fill ill Justin will go to the Hacwon like a protist. Summer Break is about going to hackwon 24hours.

6-08-09 Iambic poem. Yearin is a very tall woman. Yearin is also very cool Yearin is is girl

class work 6-5 said to finish it in home is ok.

. What are three things that you liked about the character in your novel. Be specific by giving examples. She went through every pain and torture that a girl could take and she was still alive and it was a happy ending. b. What were the three most important events? Her dad died SHe was born in disaster SHe married Rama. c. In what ways are you different from the main character? Be specific. My family is wealthier than hers and I don't dance and I am not a girl and I am atleast Korean. d. List five things about the setting of the story. The setting of the story is in India. It seems pretty poor. It seems to happen in 1800's It seems to be a very warm place. And it looks peaceful. e. What do you think are three major themes (messages that the author is trying to get across) in the story? Why? Even though life can be depressing you can still make up and have a worderful life. Effort is everything you need to sucess. There are lot of events that nature can make even though it is indifferent to all the men. f. What are three good things you could say about this book? -There was a happy ending. The author described the girl's power of dancing like Shiva really well THe author made the setting really clear.



This is the chapter 11-21 6-05

classzork 2 quizzes 5-28

notetaking 5-28 learned that Tanka that it was a 31 syllable poem and 1300 years from Japan

Inae 14 lines Saekespear was very skilled in writing these poem. Clara It was an African American poetry 3 stanzas Christina Yang talking poem almost nonsence James Three lines of poetry It could beun rhymed

Chloe It is abcdefway first line is A second is B Will stanza or poem of four lines Frist line rymes with the third one. CHristina kim Lyric poem it is serious And it started in greece Yearin SOng form of French poetry 10-15 lines written in two poems Hyundo sth that isn't a poetry into a poetry It can be untreated and ststematic manner.

Justin It comes from greek word out and speak poem that describes a photo. Hanna: It is known as duilian Also antithetical couplets Displayed in the Chinese New Year festival Justin.P It is a poem with four lines stanza that has first and third and second line. Chanel It is a poem that tells a story. 2nd and 4th are the rhytms

Home work Ghazal ppt This was the daily work 5-26th 2009

Homework for 5-25

couplets are smart rhyme, although not all couplets rhyme (a poem may use white space to mark out couplets as well). Where-e'er you find "the cooling western breeze," In the next line, it "whispers through the trees;" If crystal streams "with pleasing murmurs creep," The reader's threatened (not in vain) with "sleep." Tercet:A **tercet** is composed of three lines of poetry forming a stanza or a complete poem.English-language haiku is an example of an unrhymed tercet poem. A poetic triplet is a tercet in which all three lines follow the same rhyme, Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Quatrain:A **Quatrain** is a stanza of poetry consisting of four lines.

Who is the mother why is she the mother It is the earth Earth is our mother Sonnet:The **sonnet** is one of the poetic forms that can be found in lyric poetry from Europe Talking to myself there Someone had overheard. I was lost for a word. There was nothing to share. Embarrassed I was there. Left awkward and absurd. A broken wingless bird. With nowhere to fly there. Caught red faced there was I. Didn't want to be seen. I just wanted to die. I just wanted to scream. I'm so terribly shy. Lost for words it would seem A **ballad** is a form of verse, often a narrative story and set to music. Ballads were characteristic of particularly British and Irish popular poetry and song from the later medieval period until the nineteenth century and used extensively across Europe and later north America

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Chapter 11 Nalini and Parvati visited often at night and they always talked together about their private businesses and they became friends again. The mood is very happy and glightful in the begining .It gets very bright for Parvati and finally she got a way to freely express her dancing skills. Chapter 1-10 Shiva's fire The first chapter of this book is basically about Meenakshi making a daughter and before she came out it was all peaceful and her mom was in a very calm mood. Meenakshi was happy to have a daughter and she was happy throughout her pregnancy. It was Maharaja Narasimha’s birthday and he was a very important person. The baby was borned but because maybe of the cows something bad seems to come toward them. WIld wind and water came up to them.The characters that came out were Venkat which apears to be the son, Sundar is the father, Raja is one of the famous person in the village. Meenakshi is the mother of Parvati and Parvati is the girl who was borned in the birthday of Raja. The setting was in India and it seem very far from the mordern days because there are elephants for movements.

chapter 2 There are so many things that happen in this, but the part that interests me the most is the setting. The setting is the same from the last chapter which is in India. But in such a short period there were lot of different and complicated things that happened. It was very complicated. I was confused it was mainly about the kid being born. It was said and proven that the child was born in a very bad day because there was a disaster that day. The theme is very sad because the day the child was born but it is also happy in a way that the child is born and being loved. But it is still very hopeless. chapter 3 Meenakshi and Venkat is running away in this chapter also bringing their children. They ran away to the Sathya’s house and every body were very surprised. There they met their aunt and they were resting. There was this scary foreshadowing speach in this middle of the chapter saying that “What the baby already understood was that the events of the day of her birth had wrought a terrible change in her family’s world. The cyclone that came seemed to benigned. The storm destroyied everything in the village. Mr. Sathya comes out oas the uncle and there are many other characters like Mr.Balaraman that comes out. But as the story develops we can see the move between the mother Meenakshi and Parvati improving. Chapter 4 In the beginning of chapter 4 there was a rumor spread throughout the camp that during the cyclone the wife of the Raja had given birth to the sickly male child who was unlikely to live. Because of the cyclone Raja donated and provided the people with food and water. The story also has a part of feeding the babies. Meenakshhhi was very glad to see her baby being perfectly normal. There was Sundar’s funeral and the theme got sad again. Then Venu falls ill and bad things keep on happening. Chitra dies and the food supplies runs out in Raja and the Sathya’s family too. But there comes the miracle Venu’s health and the physical condition improves. Bit by bit the village was being rebuilt. Parvati meets the dancing Shiva statue at the center of the shining halo of fire. Some weeks after Sathya’s family move back in the castle. Subash then gets lost by a tigger. Then two days later another child gets lost. chapter 5 The theme is very sad and also very scary because of the Tigers coming closer everyday. Every night they were afraid so they had a stick for protection. The setting is still in India and it is right now in night. There are not a lot of new characters except for the tigers. Then there were these forces sent to kill the tigers and they were fierceful with elephants. Then later in this story Meenakshi gets hit with a mud by the auntie. Auntie called her a witch saying that her daughtor brought the destruction. She also said you and your children stole food from your in-laws, you are an evil. Nothing but trouble has plagued us since that child was born. Then the rice came out good. Chapter 6 The setting is still in Nandipuram and it is still very poor rural districts. It was treeless divided into fields with people working at harvest and planting time. When the next year’s monsoon arrived the people of Nandipuram had produced enough rice and sugar to sell with the money they had bought fruits and vegetables and spices. The next year Sathya bought two palm trees and planted them outside his stone house. Parvati grew to be a child of sunny disposition great charm and cleverness and excellent health. She started to dance like Shiva Nataraja. Her cousins Mohan and Mahesh joined the village boys who tormented Parvati. Then they would get in trouble. Parvati said that she is dancing like the Shiva which is the god of destruction. So she got warned and she was grounded from dancing. The theme is very cheerful and hopeful until Parvati’s dancing part. chapter 7 The story about phenomenon of Parvati and the fire became well known. Everybody crowded when she came out of the court yard she her mother kept her in the house. One day when she got out of the house animal gathered around her and she was talking to them. Over time Meenakshi known that her daughter is different from the normal kids. Fuel had been scarce in the years since the cyclone. Parvati becomes friends with all the animals. She became friends with the cobra too. Then one day famous master Guru Pazhayanur Muthu Kumara Pillai came to the village from Madras a long distance away just to see that kid. Which is Parvati. Guru says that Parvati has a special skills of dancing and said that it was a natural talent and said that it would be shameful to get against the nature and not dance. Guru wants Parvati to go to school and learn. The theme is miserable because there are two emotions mixed. It is sad and also very delightful. Chapter 8 They now talk about going to school and now they are packing Parvati. After two weeks Parvati departed. Before she departed Meenakshi said that just remember your father and said that he was a good man. When she arrived a pony came to pick her up. When she reaches there she meets her new mom named Amma and promised her to be amazing dancer and the rest of the chapter is about describing Madras. The setting changes to Madras and the theme is very peaceful and relaxible for Parvati and she looks very delighted by her life. Amma appears as a mother for this novel. The theme is very peaceful and it is happy and we can see a very bright future of Parvati. Chapter 9 Starting from chapter 8 this story’s theme started to be very peaceful and everything started to work in a way that Parvati wanted. She met her new friend named Indira in the new town she is at and also Parvati got along with Rukmali and Kamala. Days and days passed and her love to Shiva improved on on on. She wanted to dance like Shiva and be like Shiva. Then she says to the people that she wants friend but she has never got a friend knowticing that everybody came to her and acted so differently from the people in the town that she was in before. The next day Guru thought her and other to friends in the school movements of bharata natyam. Then the theme changes. Parvati gets depressed and the theme gets sad again. But sympathy happens. Her new mom Nalini supports her like a real mom and she listens to her daughter's depressed story. chapter 10 This chapter is very sad theme in the beginning and this Parvati wants to not to see the Shiva and also everytime she is thought about the sari that his mom wore. She was became to be known as the girl who drops stuff. She was missing her family every day. The theme and the mood changes very depressed again. Nallini comes to her and says that she thinks that Parvati is different and everybody else knowisted it too. They become true friends by Parvati telling her secret to the Nalini. But she missed her mom. It is very sad ending.

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Big Poetry Project May 15th

my own wiki warm up for may 13 3 types of poem spine poem Where is the cat that went wild like a things such as macbook are wierd (Life Lessons) I'm learning to play And I'm learning to study And I'm learning to laugh Not cry, when I feel happy And I'm learning not to curse And I'm learning not to punch And I'm learning (though it sometimes really hurts me) Not to be loud And I'm learning to hate When I am doing extra HW  And I'm learning that it's much Much easier to be dead

Animal poem. I am a tiger orange as a orange I eat other animals I sleep when I am sleepy I can kill my preys really well. I can be cute I am a tiger

Line 1 = Opposite of line 7 Line 2 = Describe line 1 Line 3 = Action about line 1 Line 4 = 2 nouns about line 1 Line 5 = Action about line 7 Line 6 = Describe line 7 Line 7 = Opposite of line 1

Hot pink, color, very warm, color of red or pink sun rising sun, pink a murder scene in a rainy day very gloomy and dark like black, you can't see anything. dark

1. Rain is falling down Down Down Down Down Down Down Down The rain is falling It is different from Inae's poem. If we say that Inae's poem is a clown Emily's poem is a principle becuase it is boring down word is reapeating too much and making the poem very borin I would give her 2 for the word choice

Ocean water is very sticky and smelly but fun to play in - It is awsome. I can smell the ocean by reading her poem. the word choice is very enteressting because it is really funny and those things grab my attention. evidence: Ocean water is very sticky and smelly. -you really don't describe ocean as sticky and smelly but she made it make sense and that made it pure comedy. I would stiill give her 3 for word choice.

P.730 1-4 1. He used to lived close to the Eske river(River near border between England and Scotland) lived in the West. 2.There was a marraige that was going on. 3.Ellen and the main character are related by family. 4.Now they are married.

1-5 (critical) 1.Maybe she liked the Lochinvar more or her parents wanted her to marry for money. 2.I don't really know but I think becuase it is marrage everybody are paying attention. 3. He is very shy character. 4.Not really because nothing that he did got justified. 5. Man is weak and wimpy.

Haiku poem in spring

Oh spring Oh spring yeah It's the time of free horse plays It's my birthday time.

People falls in love They like each other a lot It is a fun time.

I don't understand poem

I don't understand why my life is like this. I don't understand why we need to fight over money. I don't understand why people only cares about them selves. I don't understand why there is war

I don't understand why I need to live. I don't understand why there is religion and why there is Jesus. I don't understand why do we need to die and why we get old/ I don't understand this world.

THe blues song

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The Seal 1. The mood of this poem is very simple. You can know it by the word choice. FLuffs of sandy. There aren't any thing new about the word choice. 2.The seal diving under water. 3.The speaker might be the seal of the author of this poem. 4. It would be more violent and faster. without the mouth full of fish it would be mouth full of blood. 5.It is a poem and very simple and applies very good to the theme.Also it describes about an animal. ONe about a seal and one about a ca;f. Also it directly relates to water.

Poem posting Langston Hughes poem 1. It is boring and it makes me very tired. Very creative LIfe is a bird who can't fly. Weary Poem The rythm is very slow It is slow like a snake but the THe negro speaks of river My soul has gettin deep like the rivers very heart touching poem. A dream deffered raison in the sun or does it explode Very strong word choices that grabs my attention.

Synonym poem title: LOVE

LOVE can be magical, sad, or graceful Love, enjoyment, crush, delight, emotion, flame Love gives us enjoyment and it gives you a crush in your heart, It is a emotion and a feeling for that moment and it is like a game.

Earth day poem

Earth our Earth Sun is rising And pollution is rising Elders are dying Our Earth is dying People wants industrial happenings to happen Little people cares for global warming and what will happen People always want love and give love. Earth always give love but really want love.

-If you care little bit more attention to this world and do one thing good to the earth you are saving the earth and saving the earth which is dying.

Post comments on poetry slam I think this is a very good exericise to get rid of stress and I think our school should have event like this because this is pure fun.

Riddle poem and List poem4-20partner poem

School School always hold my legs like a cobra But I like school because it is fun like my best friend. School is like a clown who always make entertainment. Some of my friends says that the teachers are like pickle pepper. I think school is Homer simpson because it is funny- example of conceit. But still I love school more than I love my house.

What I like I like basket ball I like TV I like games I like Michael Jordon I like myself I like mylife.

Lake : Blue:
 * **definition: ** || inland body of water ||
 * **Synonyms: ** || <span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"><span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|basin], <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|creek] , inland sea, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|lagoon] , lakelet, loch, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|mere] , millpond, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|mouth] , <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|pond] , <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|pool] , <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|reservoir] , <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|sluice] , <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|spring] , tarn ||

Pond: Definition
 * **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">definition: **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"> || <span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">sky, sea color ||
 * **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">Synonyms: **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"> || <span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"><span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|azure], beryl, blue-gray, blue-green, cerulean, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|cobalt] , indigo, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|navy] , <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|royal] , sapphire, teal, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|turquoise] , ultramarine ||

Fish:
 * **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">Definition: **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"> || <span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">small body of water ||
 * **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">Synonyms: **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"> || <span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"><span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|basin], <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|dew] , duck pond, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|lagoon] , lily pond, millpond, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|pool] , <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|puddle] , small lake, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|splash] ||
 * **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">Synonyms: **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"> || <span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"><span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|basin], <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|dew] , duck pond, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|lagoon] , lily pond, millpond, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|pool] , <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|puddle] , small lake, <span style="color: rgb(164,101,0); text-decoration: none;">[|splash] ||

What am I? Fast, I am like a cheetah Big, I am like a pond Blue, I am like a ultramarine fish Deep, I am like a lake. Cool, I am like a fish.
 * **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">Definition: **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"> || <span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">throwing bait to catch seafood ||
 * **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">Synonyms: **<span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';"> || <span style="color: rgb(77,78,81); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">angle, bait, bait the hook, bob, cast, cast one's hook, cast one's net, chum, extract, extricate, find, go fishing, haul out, net, produce, pull out, seine, trawl, troll ||

I am the sea.

Poetry



Alliteration

Apple baffled for a while to eat the Apple. Assonance The Onomatopoeia The fire boomed and the popcorn blewed. Simile She dances like a gorilla Hyperbole My life last night was the most dirtiest day of my life because I got kicked in the butt. Personification There was a big cow that was smoking pipe. Allusion My girlfriend

Chris's self portrait -4/15 don't read it. <span style="font-family: 맑은 고딕;">My heart is like a paper that is cut in to peaces. Always broken after someone leaves me but still a heart. My eyes are like a magnet. If I see that person my eyes just moves like a magnet that is closed to metal. My feet are stockers. Everywhere that person goes I want to go too. My heart is an idiot. It bumps for no reason when she comes next to me. My heart holds love that is red as the sun. I live in nervousness and happiness and depression.

Chris CHoi 4-13

blues event <span style="font-family: 맑은 고딕;">you need to explain your feelings about the song. You need to express your self. You need to have it repeated You need to have it a good rhythm. You need to name the tune Also keep the beats make it repeat.

Chris CHoi 4-13

4-09-09 poem

chloe had a tall Tiger Its face was black as macbook. And everywhere that chloe went The Tiger was sure to go.

It followed her to Club one day Which was against the rules. It made the children dancing and playing To see a Tiger at Club.

Walcome to ma wald~ 4-08-09

<span style="font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">Nothing is everlasting except Love

Ugly is timeless Gorgeous is that moment Love is forever. Beauty last short <span style="font-family: 맑은 고딕;">School is tempormentary Evil is long lasting.

4-7-09 <span style="color: rgb(255,0,0);">1st pers <span style="color: rgb(255,3,0);">on point of view; 3rd person point of view; alliteration; allusion; biography; character trait; climax of a novel; fable; fiction; flashback; foreshadowing; free-verse 1st person point of view is a narrative story which is described by only one main character and the story flows by his opinion. 3rd person point of view:The **third-person subjective** is when the narrator conveys the thoughts, feelings, opinions, etc. of one or more characters alliteration:is the repeated occurrence of a consonant sound at the beginning of several words in the same phrase. allusion: is a figure of speech that makes a reference to, or representation of, a place, event, literary work, myth, or work of art Biography: It is a person's life story. Character trait: It is the basic inforamtion of the character. Climax of a novel: It is the most important and the most important part of the novel. Fable: is a succinct story, in prose or verse Fiction:It is a story that is written that is maden up fake. Flashback: It is going back and forth of the story Foreshadowing:It is telling the future of the novel beforehand. freeverse:descriing no style of poem/ 4-2-09

20. Tell a story about a day in which everything went wrong.

This is when I went to Washington for summer camp. I was always happy, except that day. When I woke up, I was late. I was hurrying to get my clothes on and I fell down when I'm putting my pants one. Then, I thought, it's not going to be good today. I went in the bus and teacher I didn't really like set beside me. From here is the real story, when my day went really went wrong. During I was going to school, it started to rain. It's okay if it rains and and I love rain. The thing is, I didn't bring my umbrella <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS', cursive;">Voice I gave her 3 for voice because most of the words and phrases communicate but rearely capture the reader's imaginations

Word choice. The word choices are very familiar and phrases communicate but rarely capture the reader's imagination. There are some success in the word choice. Mundane : students Change : Bunch of wild animals happy exciting feeling sad dull feeling in your heart. time the amount of your life. shake to tremble your body. power the strong physical strenght you get. citizen group of people who are powerless history the study of time passing. car a vehicle that makes our life easier leader a person who can take charge of a lot of people

Writing gym

<span style="color: black; font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">1. Suppose you had invented a time machine. Write a story about what you did with it. <span style="font-family: 맑은 고딕;">If I only had a time machine I would go back to 1942 and be a trusted general of Hitler. Then I would go out to wars. When I get more trust and reach to the higher rank I would get Hitler out of his power and be the leader of Germans and Nazi. Then I would surrender to the United Forces. Then I would be friends of Churchill and FDR. If I become friends with Churchill I would be a VIP friend of him and always sleep over in his house. When Churchill dies I would tell he citizens that I am Churchill is my friend, then they will vote me as a president. If I successfully become the president I would wait until the Korean war starts. Then I would bomb the North Korean Army with my Aegis destroyer. Then I would talk with the American Presidents and just bomb the Russians and China. Then the whole history will change because of my acts.

I think I would give my self a 3 because the word choice was mundance meaning that there weren't special wordchoices. It was like my life nothing new. Just boring. agressive lunchlady in a car

The agressive lunchlady in a car will imagine that he is in the cafeteria and just get the tire out and boil it using the heat of the engine. Then will imagine the wheel as the frying pan and then she will throw the boiled tire and then throw it around the wheel. Then he will rip off the gear shift and think that as a fork and spoon and then prodide it to the elders. When she serves it to the elders she would be very eager to see them eat like a pig so she is going to spoon feed them. If they don't like it she is going to starve them and wait until they say that they want to eat the tire. Then she will try one bite and if it taste awful she will say that the elders poluted the masterpage made by her and throw up in the barthroom. <span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(192,80,77); font-family: 'Verdana', 'sans-serif';">**What could a(n)** <span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(192,80,77); font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';"> "shy""grandfather" "mall" The grandfather who is shy will do something very cool in a mall. They will first enter the mall and his faces are going to be red becuase looking at those comercial people who come up to you and ask you to buy some product from their company. The grand father will then follow them becuase he is so kind to say no. When he finally relizes that the comercial people are tring to sell lipsticks from Chanel he gets angry but becuase he is shy he just buys it and pupts it on. Then he would go to Guess and buy some skinny Jean but this time all the sizes doesn't fit him becuase he is skinny he got a girl's pants. When he relizes that his shirts doesn't fit him he tries to find a brand that makes coats he went in Prada. Becuase Prada only had woman mink and he really needed it he just baught that and put it on him. THen he saw a woman wearing a high heel so he bought a high heel and put on a perfume. When he was tring to get out the director of next America's Top Model came up to him and asked him to be a model. 1 Year later he became the most famous model who dressed like a granny.
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<span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(31,73,125); font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">This photo is very interesting because there can be several different topics. It might be interpreted as peace between two mens. It is partly very silly because there is the horse's butt sticking out. There are some guns held up so this might be the start of war. When I saw at the end I gound out that the men on the left desn't have a perfect smile. I first recognized the horses's butt. <span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(247,150,70); font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">This is a portrait of the Pope. I recoqnized the very unique color. I reqognized ate the first the red scarf that the pope was wearing. At the end I noticed that the pope's face is kind of looking mad. This photo looks kind of scary becuase of the pope's face.

Grading <span style="color: rgb(146,208,80); font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">Ideas Some of my topic wasn't really clear and it didn't explain the part about where it mentioned the good part. My topic was manageable but not that strong and it didn't have a lot of details There were some supporys The topic was too broad. so I gave my self a 3

Sentnece Fluency I give my self 3 I have some grammer errors. There are some run on sentences Some of the sentences makes sence I makes sence really good. <span style="color: rgb(146,208,80);">

Organization I will give myself a 4 The paper was recognizable introduction and conclusion. Transition sometimes worked. I didn't have a cool font or a title. the title is present.

Voice I will give my self a 3 I was pretty much sincere but not fully engaged or involved. The writing has dicernable purpose but it wasn't too bad/ There was some persuative ideas I was aware of the purpose.

Word choice I didn't use very hard words and there were a lot of familiar word and phrases The words and phrases are functional There were only few successes of word choices. I put some effort of colorful language That's why I gave my self a 3.

conventions I showed some spellings mistakes and the punctuation was sometimes incorrect. THere were some problems with the grammer I did good in the capitalization. my paragraph contained lot of effort.<span style="color: rgb(0,0,0);"> <span style="color: rgb(146,208,80);">So I gave my self a 3. <span style="color: rgb(0,0,0);">

<span style="color: rgb(166,166,166); font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">My writing is very personal and explains what will happen in this world in 100 years. I myself connects strongly with the audience through the intriguing focus of the topic selection of relevant details and the use of natural engaging language 5 <span style="color: rgb(166,166,166);">[|Writing Workout] Write about what you think the world will be like in 100 years.

This world will be poluted badly with all the bad air that comes out of the factories and the Ozone layers will be completely destroyed but nobody is going to care about it and this world will be poluted more. Then all the human in this world will be mutated and killed in mischief that they created by themself and it will be too late to regret what you did becuase there is going to be no way to stop it then. Everybody will be busy blaming other and waiting for their death time to come. Also but the good part is that they might have tecnology to move to another planet or just ave the earth by stop using fossil fuels and carbon dioxide. But I have this feeling that in 200 years or in 100 years that human civilization is going to face a great conflict and a crisis. The economic crisis around the world is foreshadowing me that there will be a bad sinario us humans are facing which is going to come to use pretty quick. IN worst scene sinario we won't be able to see hear taste smell feel anything becuase we will be dead. Not just me and you everybody will be dead. <span style="color: rgb(166,166,166);">

<span style="color: yellow; font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">Your generation faces many problems. Identify one of these problems The biggest problem our generation faces is thatWe only care about our selves and don't really care about others a lot, also but there is a things about the economic crisis and also the global warming is another thing that really affects our world.

VOCABS Apprehension:anxiety fear I have apprehension toward this world because it is always messing my life up. Conscientiously:honerably, carefully I conscientiously got the award from the president of Korea for saving 3 patriots exquisite: Beuatiful: highest quality I found an exquisite painting of myself in the bathroom. haughty:arrogant; proud I haughtly got out of school thinking that I finally did something and I finally learned something. intermittent: periodic on and off I intermittently got off my headphones when I heard something very innapropreate coming out of it. Intrigue: Secret Plot There used to be an intrigue tring to kill all the principles but it unfortuantly failed. meticulous: detail oriented; precise The plan was very meticulous and very secret but the principles escaped and the mission failed. Tremulous: quivering trembling This world was tremulous with terror. Trepidation: a nervousness uncertainty I have trepidation mind in my vains and blood.

<span style="color: rgb(227,108,10); font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">8. Some teachers are special. Without giving any names, explain why one particular teacher in your life was special.

He is very special because he really never teaches anything and he always gives us a lot of homework that really annoys me and also so many quizes. He gives us homework Sometimes without telling us anything. His teaching styles are very different from other teachers. He always is very nice to us and I like him personaly but I really hate all of his homeworks and especially the part he always fix our grammer when we speak. Also sometimes I am very confused about all his quizes. I really enjoy him as a person but as a teacher I don't like how he gives us daily homework and lot of projects and quizes. I really don't like that part and also he was very specail he really seems to care about me and I really care about him too. <span style="color: rgb(227,108,10);">

Chapter 8 Question: Who is duke of Olivaries? What was the king wearing? Whata did Angustias adore? Vocabs: deprived:lacking the necessities of life Mike was deprived because he was almost half monster because of his personality. obedient:obeying or willing to obey Mike was being obedient to me becuase I gave him money. apprentics:a person who works for another in order to learn a trade mike was studing apprentics but as he got older he lost interest in that subject.

In all the chapters I see more and more respect toward the master. The king frequently visited the studio and became closer with Diego., Paquita. Paquita likes him The king always come to the studio The daughtor comes too/

Essay <span style="color: black; font-family: 'Arial', 'sans-serif';">Write about what you think the world will be like in 100 years. <span style="font-family: 맑은 고딕;">In 100 years from now there is going to be some good things and some bad things happening around us humans. One of the main reason is going to be the natural disaster like the ozone layer being destroyed and polluting of air. Also I noticed as the technology and time passes by the ignorance and hatred toward other people in humans increase everyday. You can see more and more conflicts between a small group of people to a large group of people. Like the conflict between some children and when this gets bigger it becomes a war. As the days pass by and we flip the calendar page there are more and more o zone layer being destroys by the carbon dioxide we use and also other factories that harms the ozone layer. As we can see in our daily lives there are more and more animals that are losing homes and dying in pain. Everybody in this planet thinks that we should stop global warming but except for some people nobody really cares a lot about it. They just says that they care and they just throw their trash away anywhere and ride their car to distance that is so close that it will only take you like 1 minutes by walking. Also as the technology improves humans get more and more of this ignorance and hatred in their heart. Us humans are like the main character of garden of eden. In the garden of eden there was Adam and Eve and this story is basically about Adam being born and he was very kind. Then Eve comes out, they lived a very happy life until one snake comes out and gives Adam idea to pick the apple. That when all the conflict happens and hatred comes inside the happy land. That snake was the evil. As I said in the last paragraph Adam is basically a brief summary of human life. All the humans are born very kind and sweet until you really face the reality which is full of evil and hatred between human souls. After facing reality you get more and more hatred in your heart and if you don’t get rid of that hatred you will get more and more hatred in your heart you will suffer. If that happens to all the people in this world then we have a problem because there is going to be war and that will be the end of world. This world might be good but this world might be bad in 100 years. In my point view I think it will be bad because I never know what will happen in the future and that is up to how this world full of evil humans act. Evan I my self will say that I am a very evil person because I have hatred toward other people. This essay taught me lot of things. This world could be interpreted in few different levels. Good and evil, and what hatred and ignorance has on our heart.

<span style="font-family: 맑은 고딕;"> In 100 years from now there is going to be some good things and some bad things happening around us humans. 1.Later in the past this world is going to be bad. 2.Later in the past this world will be dirty like a pig. 3.Have you ever thought what this world will be like in 100 years? 4.In 100 years the streets are going to be full of poops and the air will be full of dirty poisons. 5.What is the year when there will be dirty streets and air full of polutance. 6.The dirty streets was the kind of prediction about what is going to happen in 100 years. 7.You might be surprized to know that this world is in a good shpae compared to what it's going to be in 100 years. 8.Tall dark and with an air that affects the kids lungs will kill us all.