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See Won's Wikispace.
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june 3rd



june 3rd

Answers A. Foxfire was a person who dreams- he dreamed about going to the golden mountain He set his dreams into actions- he actually went to the mountain Foxfire did not give up easily- later he actually goes B. The phoenixes coming and raiding, and when her father leaves, lastly, the part where Foxfire goes to the golden mountains C. I am not a character in a book. D. The British attack, china, when cassia is around 13, old middle asia, three willows E. i think one is don't give up, have faith, trust your family F. i think it is a good book for history class, it is a good book for educational reasons, and it can help people and kids dream and acheive goals

Questions a. What are three things that you liked about the character in your novel. Be specific by giving examples. b. What were the three most important events? c. In what ways are you different from the main character? Be specific. d. List five things about the setting of the story. e. What do you think are three major themes (messages that the author is trying to get across) in the story? Why? f. What are three good things you could say about this book?



Mike and David 1. Quatrain 4 line stanza 2. Iambic Pentameter- 5 stressed syllables

Robby and Colin 1. form of a argument with 3 stanzas 2. each stanza is followed by a repeated line

Michael and Johnny 1. Form of verse, often a narrative story set to music 2. written and sold as single sheet broadside.

5-25 presentation


 * 1) 1. The seasons
 * 2) 2. The Sun rising up and down
 * 3) 3. Flying like a bird

The serpents children 1-10

classwork 13th 3 types of poems

There once was a Bean named gene. Who ate Jeans. But the bean, To be mean. They were green. this day is awsome this day is great and so cool yea i like to sleep

The itsy bitsy spider Climbed up mike's leg Down came the torso of michael And mike and micheal both screamed like little girls Out came the spider And ran away And the itsy bitsy spider bit mike and michael again

2 new haiku for today (5-11-09)

Light drizzle dropping Soft light drops beating down from the sky later the sky rages..

Spring may be here but, im still not here for im dead just my soul is dead

Classwork for 5-11-09

1. Christina koo- voice- 3A - word choice- 3C

2. Sujin cho- voice- 3A word choice- 3F

Haiku for may 7th classwork

Flowers everywhere Spring in Korea has come cherry blossoms here.

Spring in Korea Has come to help us on our way innocent people.

May 7th homework

- The poem has a lovely feeling and seems to be directed toward a woman
 I don't understand poem

I don't understand why i have to go to school I don't understand why i have to do my homework I don't understand why you have to be here in my life

I really don't understand why i am here I really don't understand what i have to do I really don't understand how i have to do it



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 April 28th, 2009 Poem for middle school matters

Universe Impossible to understand, stretch impossibly far too important for the puny humans to understand, later when we pass on to the other world. but some will be reborn to this same miserable world, Whatever is my purpose on this world? What is God's will? No one will ever know.

 Alliteration: Elliot eats eggs every day. Assonance: Sung joony moony boony doony Onomatopoeia: The gun shot, bang bang bang! Imagery: The lush green bush sparkled in the early morning dew. Metaphor: I stood at the biggest crossroad of my life Simile: She dances like a cow Hyperbole: I could eat a whole cow Personification: the sun smiled at us in the early morning. Allusion: my friend fights like my grandmother Synecdoche: raining cats and dogs Conceit: my heart is ice cold as the ice on the rock of the icelands Antitheses: My friend is the son of the president Paradox: civilization will always fall Symbolism: leeches symbolizes the god of death

 's portrait.

His skin is like chocolate. The chocolate that come in bars only bigger. His arms are like toothpicks. He is so weak and so his arms are just like hairy but no where to use arms. His legs are like chopsticks his legs and arms are just the same only the legs are thicker. His eyes are just like the blackest obsidian Black as coal but warm like burning coal he is nice. His heart holds love for someone I dare not mention, Also it is whiter than himself as a Mac. he lives in Bundang and eats chocolate.

 See Won's Self portrait

My arm is like the trunk of an elephant that can reach the heights as such as the basketball hoop. My hands are like the claws of the lion My feet are like the paws of the jaguar My neck is that of the giraffe able to reach distances. My hair is that of an unruly lion's mane My legs are that of a frog in which that jump great distances My fists are the boulders of fury that can break anything My heart hold secrets that is black as the spots on a leopard I live in Heaven



<span style="color: rgb(255, 3, 0);"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"> Comment: The poem has short words only. Not really a sentence. But I can kind of understand what it is saying. Worship god for he shakes and produces bitterness. The title doesn't really go with the poem. <span style="color: rgb(255, 3, 0);">**<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"> Warm-up for April 7th

<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Father, Bother Pencil Stencil Table, label Diaper, Piper **

<span style="color: rgb(255, 3, 0);">**<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"> HW due April 8th: **<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Define and post: <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">1st pers on point of view; 3rd person point of view; alliteration; allusion; biography; character trait; climax of a novel; fable; fiction; flashback; foreshadowing; free-verse
 * 1st person point of view**: writing that uses, I, me, or words that point to the character and tells the story as if the story happened to the author.
 * 3rd person point of view**: writing that is uses he, she, or words that point to the character indirectly and tells the story as if the story happened to the author's friend
 * Alliteration**: the occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words.
 * Allusion**: an expression designed to call something to mind without mentioning it explicitly
 * Biography**: an account of someone's life written by some one else
 * Climax** **of a novel**: the most intense or exciting point of the plot
 * Fable**: a short story usually with animals for characters.
 * Fiction**: literature in the form of prose that describes imaginary events and people.
 * Flashback**: a scene set in a earlier time than the main story.
 * Foreshadowing**: a warning or indication
 * free-verse**: poetry that does not rhyme or does not have a regular pattern
 * Character trait**: the characteristics the character has

April 1, 2009 Word choice evaluation Christina Ye Un Kim- 3B- Familiar words and phrases communicate but rarely capture the reader's imagination

March 31, 2009 10 mundane words

1. eaten- devour 2. usual- the highest probability 3. normal- standard 4. happy- delighted 5. doing- executing 6. making- creating 7. fat guy- bloated man 8. favorite- preferred 9. going- attending 10. funny- humorous

March 31, 2009 Writing station 2

prompt- 7. Write a story about what it would be like if you woke up one morning with wings.

The sun shone into my eyes as I woke up gracefully, I thought today would be the same as any other day. I had spotted a white wing behind me, I whirled around, only to find a blank wall staring back at me. But soon enough I figured out it was a mutation coming out of my body. It would have been great if I had two of them, but just one was protruding from my shoulder. if I had two of them, I would have looked like the X-man, Angel (Warren Worthington 3). But I guess change is good too. I decided to test my new wings. It was just as easy as rising my arm up and down but I felt limitless power. With the right balance, I could drift around my house with surprising ease. I lived on the 17th floor of my apartment. I thought it would be fun if i tried those scenes where a character would fall out of the window and suddenly flies up into the sky with the sun at his/her back, and only the silhouette of the person is shown which makes the person look like a hero.

March 20, 2009 VOICE shopping list

Eggs: 18 white and yellow delicious eggs. We have to make more egg salad sandwiches and get more people to eat our sandwiches at our shop so we can profit more.

Milk: With a tasty sandwich you always need a drink to accompany it! So, the best drink would be, Of course, Milk!

Bread: to make a sandwich, you need bread to make it a sandwich, or else it wouldn't be a sandwich. So tasty bread makes a good sandwich with the right ingredients

Evaluation for 3 different Grades. 3-20-09

Writing 1: My favorite pet. Voice: 1.....E: Narrative, the development of the topic is so limited, that no point of veiw is discernable

Writing 2: My Dad Voice: 3......A: The witting attempts to connect with the audience in an earnest pleasing, but impersonal manner

Writing 3: The Sled Run Voice: 5...... E. Narrative writing is personal and engaging, and makes you think about the author’s ideas or point of view.

An Autobiography for Juan de Pareja

3- 18 Proofreding and eassay Christina's Eassay

Voice: 3; Sounds like a boring collage textbook, only without sophisticated words.

Sentence Fluency: 3; there are a few run-on sentences

Due Date: 3-4-09 Questions: 1. What did Paquita send in the first letter? 2. Did Juan get caught with the letter? 3. How did master feel about the King? How did he feel about the Duke of Olivares?

Vocabulary: Canvas- a strong unbleached cloth made from hemp. Master paints on a canvas.

Lisp- a speech defect. My friend has lisp so he can’t speak very well

Configuration- an arrangement of elements, in a particular form, combination, or figure. All hydrocarbons have a certain configuration.

Summary: Paquita and Juan Buastista write love notes to each other, and it is all because of the rose Paquita found at the shop her friend, Angustias, owns, and became a symbol for them both. But their love was found out by Master, which he strangely approved of. And soon they were to be married.

Recipe for Happiness - 50 liters of innocence - 1 tablespoon of not knowing anything - 20 ounces of giving people joy - 3 pinches of laughs - 4 pinches of good food - 50 teaspoons of things you like to do

Instructions Take the innocence, and mix it with the not knowing anything stir it for about 5 minuets. After that throw in the joy of other people and then bake the batter. Then sprinkle on the pinches of laughs and good food, lastly add the things you like to do for display.