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[|Writing Work Out!]


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Now the time has come! Sun is screaming it's summer break!

Summer say some stupid sounds Here we are to see the Sears!

Summer is like a drug You get addicted to its charm as time passes

I bet in summer, I can read comic for 24 hours! I love summer and I wish it would be summer all year!

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Chanel likes to eat ice creams


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a. What are three things that you liked about the character in your novel. Be specific by giving examples. = I liked about Parvarti because she loves to dance and I do too. She is also positive that even though many people liked

b. What were the three most important events? c. In what ways are you different from the main character? Be specific. d. List five things about the setting of the story. e. What do you think are three major themes (messages that the author is trying to get across) i


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Emily: Tanka
 * 31- syllable poems
 * Most popular form of poery in Japan for at least 1300 years.

Will: Quatrain
 * 1st and 3rd rhymes
 * 2nd and 4th line rhymes

Christina.K: Ode
 * Form of a lyric poem(expressing the writer's emotions)
 * Started in the Greek and Roman history.

Yaerin: Rondeau
 * Form of French poetry
 * 10-15 lines written on two rhymes

Hyundo: Found poem
 * type of poetry created by taking word, phrases
 * .sometimes whole passages from other sources and reframing them as poetry

Justin.Y: Ekphrasis
 * Graphic description of a visual work of art.
 * Considered generally to be a rhetorical device in which one medium of art.

Chris: Ghazal
 * Rhyming couplets and a refrain
 * Each line must share the same meter

Justin.P: Pantum
 * Four lines stanza
 * First and third, and second and fourth rhyme

Chanel: Ballad
 * Poem that has story
 * Second and fourth lines of each verse rhyme

Christina.Y: Found Poem
 * Takes the word/phrases from other source
 * Resulting Poem can be treated or untreated

Brian: Sonnet
 * Lyric poetry from Europe
 * Example, "Red Blushed And All Cut Up"

Clara Kim: Bop
 * Created by Afaa Michael Weaver
 * poetic argument consisting of three stanzas

James Chae: Tercets
 * Any three lines of poetry
 * The haiku is a tercet poem

Inae: Sonnet
 * One of the poetic forms that can be found in lyric poetry from Europe
 * 14 lines lyric poem


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 * <8 chapter Summery>**

Sorry Mr.S. My whole thing is gone. I need to write it again.... :( I will fix it during weekend!


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 * <3 different Poem May 13. 09>**

(Animal Poem) I am a fox Orange as a my favorite t shirt in my closet I run fast to do not get caught from preditor I sleep like in a silent cave I can jump and trick I can fool other animals I am a fox

(Spring Poem)

Good-bye, snows. Good-bye, boardings. Good-bye, winter. Spring's ahead!

Good-bye, christmas. Good-bye, santaclaus. Good-bye, winter. Spring, hello!

Hello, flower. Hello, butterflies. Good-bye, winter. Spring's in sight!

Hello, honeys. Hello, breaks. Good-bye, winter! Hello, spring!

(Ice Cream) I am Chloe Song I run Ju Ho ‘s ICE CREAM STORE, there are flavors in my freezer you have never seen before, five divine creations too delicious to resist, why not do yourself a favor, try the flavors on my list: fishy come to me my mom is an elien starawberry fell in love with chocolate butterfly fell in to flower moo moo milk me I am Chloe Song , I run Ju Ho 's ICE CREAM STORE, taste a flavor from my freezer, you will surely ask for more.


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Hello welcomed, bright, elegant sometimes waving your hand or bowing down your hand and your head is the hello part of you body Same action but different feelings formed unpleasant, sad, ugly Bye


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Flower blossoms Rain is dropping and saying hi Spring has come to us


 * <Haiku Evaluation May. 8. 09>**

__Justin Yoon's Haiku__ Score: I would give 4. Evidence: A. Words are adequate and correct in a general sense, and they support the meaning by not getting in the way. Ex) It gives us warm breeze

__James Chae's Haiku__ Score: I would give 3. Evidence: B. Familiar words and phrases communicate but rarely capture the reader's imagination. Ex) Oh oh oh spring~


 * <Haiku about Spring May. 6. 09>**

Flowers are smiling They are very colorful and bright I love them so much

Spring in Korea It is dusty all day long Because of the dust


 * <Blues Song April. 30. 09>**

My brother is fat He eats so much

My brother is fat He eats so much

He started diet yesterday but he is still eating everyday

__My brother is cute he smiles a lot

My brother is cute he smiles a lot

Even though he smiles his fat and heavy all the time

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 * <Literature Questions April. 28. 09>**

Critical Thinking

1. Seal would be very exciting and warm. The words that describe this feeling would be swerve, flick, and plunges.

2. “ The Pasture” is very warm poem. This contributes very cool autumn day person sitting on a chair reading books.

3. You in “The Pasture” would be the reader of this poem. And the he in the “Seal” would be seal.

4. It would be more exciting and more have action. Shark is fish that is more like predator. Shark has more interesting look then Seal. It would be more fun if you describe how shark hunts.

5. They are common because they both do not tell the name. It only says “he” or “you”. For example, in the poem “The Pasture”, it says_ You come too.


 * <Langston Hughes Poem Comment April. 24. 09>**

Dreams__: It mean before you cannot catch your dream make your dream come true.__

|| This is my favorite part because this directly tells that you need to catch your dream.
 * || <span style="color: rgb(128, 0, 0);"> Hold fast to dreams

The Weary Blues__:


 * < Langston Hughes April. 24. 09 >**

- He was born from two bookkeepers. - Began writing poem at high school. - Wrote his first great poem_ "The Negro Speaks of Rivers"__


 * < Earth Day Poem April. 24.09>**

We are all in earth it gave us the birth

We make Earth dirty and it is all day cloudy

It is time for us to clean if you are not a bean


 * < Poetry Slam Comment April. 22. 09>**

It is very interesting that they can express there self. Saying things that is in your mind make it more interesting.


 * <5 Short Story Essay>**


 * <List Poem April 20. 09>**

I want dog

- My mom doesn't like dogs - My mom is scared of them - I like dogs, they are cute - My father gets angry when I say I want a dog. - Father says we already have too much children in our house - Still, I want a dog.


 * <Riddle Poem April 20. 09>**

Water

I am clear Some times I go swoosh swoosh. Fishes live inside of me I don't like sun because they take me to the clouds every time. You can drink but sometimes people miss treat me. I wish people treat me more


 * <Poems April. 17. 09>**

Shape Poem

Acrostic Poem


 * <Figurative Language April. 15. 09>**

1. Alliteration - See Sally sell seashells by the seashore.

2. Assonance - How now, brown cow.

3. Onomatopoeia - Clock went tick tack as my cat meow.

4. Imagery - Lion and tiger jumped into the pool.

5. Metaphors - My height is tall like tree.

6. Simile - My eyes are big as a candy.

7. Hyperbole - My basketball practice felt like I was in hell.

8. Personification - My bed started to scream when my brother jumping on my bed

9. Allusion - My brother dances like Michael Jackson.

10. Synecdoche - Hit the road Jack.

11. Conceit - My dog was laughing very hard.

12. Paradox - The next statement is true, the previous sentence is false.

13. Symbolism - An owl symbolises wisdom.

14. Antithesis - You did very good job on your test.


 * <Self Portrait Poem April. 15. 09>**

My eyes are like a boat sailing on a sea Splash and splash go where the boat wants to flow

My lips are like stoned cave Never opens but opens when I say my magic words

My hair is like broom in my class room Swoosh and Swoosh move back and fourth like the brown brush

My leg is like a colorful tree Change color ever season and go taller and taller every year.

My heart holds delightness and sorrowness My heart is purple like my jean I live in where I feel happyness.


 * < Warm up for April. 13. 09>**

1. Find my feeling. Blues music isn't sad song. 2. Express my self. Need a line that will convey that feeling. 3. Repeat it. Blue songs involves repeating the opening line. 4. Rhyme it! 5. Name that tune _ give your blues tune a title with the title serving as a good hook for the song. 6. Keep the beat _ Blues follow a basic 12 bar musical format.


 * < Warm up for April. 9. 09>

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 * < Warm up for April. 8. 09>**

If the sky is blue, my heart is pink If I sing a music, I hear people laughing God can you see me getting laughed?


 * <April. 2. Word Choice & Voice evaluating>**

Christopher Choi

Word Chice : I would give 3 Reasoning : There is to many " I would " repeating. B. Familiar words and phrases communicate but rarely capture the reader's imagination Ex)<span style="font-family: 맑은 고딕;"> Then I would go out to wars. When I get more trust and reach to the higher rank I would get Hitler out of his power and be the leader of Germans and Nazi. Then I would surrender to the United Forces. Then I would be friends of Churchill and FDR.

Voice : I would give 5 Reasoning : A. The writer connects strongly with the audience through the intriguing focus of the topic, selection of relevant details, and the use of natural, engaging language Ex) I only had a time machine I would go back to 1942 and be a trusted general of Hitler.

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 * <April. 1. Mundane Words>**


 * Great - Extraordinary
 * Wealthy - affluent
 * Run - gallop
 * Stop - halt
 * broken - destroyed
 * Funny - humorous
 * mad - demented
 * sad - melancholy
 * tall - monstrous
 * happy - jovial

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 * <March. 20, Final!>


 * <March. 13. Painting Critique>**

Title: Porträt des Philipp IV. zu Pferd Subject matter: Portrait. Diego was painter that drew portraits of king, queen and wealthy people. Mood: Sort of looks angry, surprised, confused, or looking at some where far. Composition: I think Philipp IV. zu Pferd was very good army leader. That's why the picture was


 * <March. 13. Evaluating my self>**

I would give 3 for word choice
 * B. Familiar words and phrases correct in a general sense, and they support the meaning by not getting in the way.
 * Ex. negative, I think, etc...

I would give 4 for my sentence fluency
 * B. Sentences are usually constructed correctly; they get the job done in a routine fashion
 * Ex. The game gets more cold and as it goes talking disappear and I can only hear the sound of basket ball bouncing in the court.


 * <March. 12 Evaluating my self>**

I would give 5 for voice
 * E, **Narrative** writing is personal and engaging, and makes you think about the author's ideas or point of view.
 * EX: I was the one who got bullied when I was 5th grade. One girl told every one in 5th grade to do not talk to me.


 * <Feb. 23 Writing Workout>**

11. Friends sometimes experience conflicts. Explain why this happens.

Ouch! Get off! Oh my gosh, what's wrong with you! Friends sometimes experience conflicts. That happened to me too, a lot! Especially in 5th grade to 7th grade.It happens mainly because of 3 things. First, telling other what other people is telling about them. Second, having negative attitude for every little thing. I want to talk about why we have conflicts and how can we fix it. Third, bad sportsmanship.

First, telling other what other people is telling about them. Bullying was big deal in girls in 5th and 6th grade. There was always a girl who was really bossy that was on top of every girl and talks about others. I was the one who got bullied when I was 5th grade. One girl told every one in 5th grade to do not talk to me. I think that happens because you tell other people what other people told you. I think that is main problem that brings fight. It is still problem that we have in 7th grade too. People talk about people and other tell people what people say. I really don't like that but I do it because others do it. Following the others sometimes can be bad thing and good thing. Following others talking about bad thing is not a good way to get rid of conflicts. To get rid of conflicts you shouldn't be on anybody's side. Need to stay in neutral all the time.

Second, having negative attitude for every little thing. Having a negative attitude all the time might make other people feel bad. For example when Joe always have a very negative thoughts. When Lydia bumps into Joe for mistake, Joe will get mad easily even though Lydia did it for mistake. Lydia tries to say sorry but she doesn't want to after Joe shows his negative attitude. This makes conflict very easily by making other people feel bad. I think to fix this, you should find something that really keeps you interested. For example I listen to music when I feel really depressed. I don't want to make other people make mad because I am mad or depressed. Finding something that makes you excited keeps you positive and at least for that moment happy.

Third, bad sportsmanship. To tell the truth I have very bad sportsmanship. Well, I play it fair but when I am losing I feel really bad and I show very negative attitude to innocent students. My favorite sports is basketball. The thing is no one wants to play basketball with me. I am good when I am in there team but I look evil to other team. I say bad things when they push me for mistake. They say sorry but there expression doesn't look good and I look evil too. So I get into fight. The game gets more cold and as it goes talking disappear and I can only hear the sound of basket ball bouncing in the court. Having a bad sportsmanship doesn't make other player pleasant to play so talking starts to disappear. I know I should fix this habit. To fix it I try my best to show smile on my face and say it's okay all the time.

Having a conflict can happen in two different ways. Bullying and telling other what you shouldn't, having negative attitude, bad sportsmanship brings conflicts. I think all of them can be fixed by many different way. People say having a conflict between friends builds more friendship. I think that really is true because my worst enemy became my best friend today.

Vocab Sent. The configuration of our new house looks better than the last one.
 * < March.3 Chapter 8>**
 * Configuration- Def. an arrangement of element in particular form, figure, or combination

Sent. Despite of studying in school, are you always happy?
 * Despite- Def. without being affected by

Sent. I got depriving score in my science test.
 * Deprived- Def. deny the possession or use something

Question__
 * Who is Duke of Olivares?
 * Where was Juan when the King was posing?
 * How many years did Cristobal and Alvaro left?

Apprehension: anxiety, fear - I felt apprehension when I step up to stage in drama class.
 * <Feb.25** **Packet PG16 Vocab HW>**

Conscientiously: honorably; carefully - I always keep all of my drawings conscientiously.

exquisite: beautiful: of highest quality - I like to go to exquisite houses to see the interior.

Haughty: arrogant; proud -I felt haughty when I saw my art up on the museum.

Intermittent: periodic; on and off - My lamp on top of my desk was broken so it kept on repeating intermittent.

Intrigue: secret plot - I needed to know the intrigue about the book before I read it.

Meticulous: detail-oriented; precise - The arts that my brother drew is all very meticulous.

Tremulous: quivering, trembling - I was tremulous during winter because it was too cold.

Trepidation: nervousness; uncertainty - Trepidation didn't help me during I was up on the stage.

**< Feb. 24. 2009 Emotion Recipe! >** Recipe for happiness!

Ingredients:


 * 4 hours of sleeping after school.
 * 1 teaspoon of talking to your friend.
 * 1 teaspoon of watching TV.
 * 1 cup of drinking Green tea latte from Starbox.
 * 10 to 12 slices of reading comic books.

Preparation: First start with fresh 4 hours morning sleep after the hard work from school.

After sleeping add 1 teaspoon of talking to your friend.

Place 1 teaspoon of watching TV over talking to your friend and blend it together.

Add 1 cup of drinking Green tea latte from Starbox then place things that were blended in the skillet and use medium fire to grill the happiness.

After spreading some sauce on it done! There is you happiness! :)


 * < Feb. 13. 2009 PP Biography >**

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