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030609 Daily work quiz 4/10 a. What are three things that you liked about the character in your novel. Be specific by giving examples. She was brave and coragious without any fear and always trying to help. b. What were the three most important events? The intro, when his dad was going to war. The middle, her mother dies. The end, the war's over. c. In what ways are you different from the main character? Be specific. I'm not different, except that I'm a boy. d. List five things about the setting of the story. peaceful, calm, cute, small, and awesome. e. What do you think are three major themes (messages that the author is trying to get across) in the story? Why? 1. live your life 2. don't be afraid 3. stand up f. What are three good things you could say about this book? 1. they have a nice story, and they have a good character line. Lastly, he had a nice climax.

Chapter 11- The End of Serpent's Children

Chapter 11: They start farming again. That's when Peony comes in to the story where she plays a role that helps Cassia's life by many different kinds of ways possible for him. Also, at that same time, the Phoenixes come out and start to come out with a greater character. After the raid made by the Phoenix, the whole village of Three Willows is poor.

Chapter 12: The raid by the Phoenixes and giving food to Peony resulted in Father, Cassia, and Foxfire having a really small meal. As usual, Foxfire had his normal crazy notions and he wouldn't quit talking about the golden mountain, but Cassie and Father didn't have time to listen to this because they had to fix the fields that the Phoenixes destroyed. However, Father felt so much more at ease when Cousin Spider came to visit in 5 years.

Chapter 13: When Father firmly explained that this was a family object and couldn't be on sale, the clerk finally accepted the offer Cassie made in selling both of the other object's that belonged to Mother's- the wardrobe and shelf. Cassia and her family decided to sell their furniture to Fortunate Enterprises. Foxfire has become addicted to the idea of the gold mountain and bribes the coolies with water to tell him about the golden mountains.

Chapter 14: Also, when Foxfire said their enemy was poverty, I wondered how the Chinese would get out of poverty. However, Father made it clear and certain that he would never make his own children turn into a slave since that would be something that Mother would never approve of. As this topic was brought up, Foxfire started to chat about his dreams in working in the golden mountain so that he could send money to the family while he stays there.

Chapter 15: There was a knock on the door and Father was surprised to find Cousin Spider and a whole group of men that Spider referred to as Father's 'Older Brothers'. Spider unexpectedly declared to live in Father's house and share their food together, but when Father refused and only told them that they'll give what they could.

Chapter 16: Although Cassie tried to calm her father down in what Foxfire had said, her Father couldn't stand it any longer and claimed that he had no son since no children of his would call his life a lie. When Father walked out of them and went to help the village, Cassie didn't even bother trying to make his brother feel better when he asked her if he really thought he was a fool and coward.

Chapter 17: Father and Cassie also found out that Tiny put himself up as Foxfire's bond so that Foxfire could buy his passage overseas, they quickly went to fix the damage so that they would be put up as Foxfire's bond. They also decided to split up half the money Foxfire sent in advance for going overseas and Tiny had to give in and accept the money. Not only that, since the clerk didn't allow Cassie and Father to go after Foxfire in a ship, all they could do was wait for Foxfire to come back.

Chapter 18: Uncle Blacky read the letter. He felt very impressive, and has a lot of meaning in it. Now, father and I really miss Foxfire, and understands how he feels about this whole issue. And this proceeds and caused many problems to be solved.

Chapter 19: He also said that although they exchanged harsh words before he parted he wouldn't apologize because like Father said before- you should never apologize if you think what you're doing is right. After the letter, Father also decided that he would buy more fields for themselves and some guns too.

Chapter 20: Now that Dusty figured out that Father had lots of money he came back to turn to them but Father couldn't stand it and threatened to shoot Dusty with his shotgun. After several attempts of fighting, Dusty managed to cut Father's arm so that he couldn't load his gun quickly enough but when Father managed he ordered Dusty to leave his village and never come back or else he'll kill him, that was the last day anyone ever saw Dusty.

Chapter 21: Father wasn't falling for it and he couldn't stand talking about Foxfire. When Cassie begged to write a letter to Foxfire, Father continued to refusing and wouldn't admit that Foxfire was his son. However, Cassie was having a start because Father admitted that he was grateful to Foxfire but he wasn't willing to say anything to him until until he realizes the truth about the Revolution and that the Work is for justice, freedom, and prosperity.

Chapter 22: He told her that she wasn't her mother and nobody expected her to be one- she just had to be herself and purchase her own dreams. Father told her gently that this was what he was truly looking for, not someone that was trying to be their mom and was hiding in her Mother's shadow.

Chapter 23: However, it looks like Cassie wasn't the only one that was having a hard time. Uncle Windy's son, Sticks, that he sent overseas was dead and the clerk came to their house to collect the money but since Uncle Windy didn't have money that time he couldn't pay back the clerk straightaway and was taken away tied up.

Chapter 24: Although it was hard living in the golden mountains, Foxfire promised that he'll stay there forever if its for his family and that they are always in his thoughts and prayers. This time, Father couldn't help but admitting that he was wrong to Foxfire.

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Mike Park, David Chang A quatrain is a stanza of poetry that consists of four lines. It appears in poems from ancient civilizations such as Ancient Greece and Ancient Rome. Iambic pentameter, the heroic stanza or elegiac stanza, It has to be five, unstressed and stressed

Robby and Colin The Bop is a recent invention. The Bop is a form of poetic argument consisting of three stanzas. Three stanzas and refrane after every line.

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1. Seasons 2. Sun 3. Sky

210509 Serpent's Children First 10 chapters paragraphs Michael Suh

Chapter 1 In this chapter, it explained things about the main character and how the story started. In here, the story was really sad and enthusiastic where Cassia's dad wanted to go and help his country, China, to be separated by the demons, British, because their life was so hard at the time when they were not controlled by a Chinese person. They were like in the edge of the knife where they had no choice except to make a helpful and small army to fight back to the British demons. They are trying to get more people to join his dad's clan. Chapter 2 In this chapter, it was an continuation where Cassia and Foxfire is saying good bye to his dad and his uncle in other words, they were the soldiers that were going to help their own country in whatever kind of way. In here, there is a lot of similarities from the first chapter, where you have a lot of effort seen. They are all in that army in order to achieve their goal with at least small amount of help but it was like that. This chapter was almost the same as the first chapter in many ways because they had almost the same story. Chapter 3 In this chapter, there are new characters such as the new aunts and uncles. The story in this chapter is not special either, this chapter is filled with stories of harvesting, where they are really boring. Since that it is the crop gathering season, the whole family is off to the farm to gather crops and work so much in order to live. It shows that they are really missing his dad where their life got so hard, also since that you don't know whether his dad is even alive or not, they are really dramatic with the things with their dad. Chapter 4 In this chapter, the story is about a woman, Aunt Patience, who is a matchmaker. Aunt Patience was trying to keep good care of Cassia and make her get married to a rich man. But, Cassia did not want to leave her brother. But Aunt Patience binds Cassia's foot with a wool and tries to make Cassia's foot pretty. The main characters in this story are Cassia, Foxfire, Aunt Piety, Lily, and Aunt Patience. To be honest, I can not find any specific emotions in this chapter because it is all just talking in a calm steady mood. The setting takes place in Aunt Patience's home. Then theme in this chapter is very painful because she binds Cassia's foot. Chapter 5 In this chapter, Cassia runs away from Aunt Patience's house and going to her regular home with her brother, Foxfire. The main characters in this story is, Cassia, Foxfire, Aunt Piety, Uncle Windy, and more. The story in this story, is honestly very boring because it was all talking with aunt and other family members. Also, it is slightly not matching with the theme of the whole real story. The theme in this about Cassia and her brother finally caring about each other and hey also defend each other. So they try to stay alive together and Aunt Piety and Uncle Windy force Cassia and Foxfire to come out but they do not and they throw spears. Chapter 6 In this chapter, Cassia's and also Foxfire's father coming back. Spider also comes back too. The main characters are Cassia, Foxfire, father, Spider, and Uncle Windy. The theme is about Cassia's father coming back from the war but the government had betrayed them. Therefore, her father is really sad that he couldn't help his country better as he thought he was capable of. So Cassia's father ends up getting injured and the doctor says that he would always be limping. The place that this time story takes place is the same old home of Cassia. Chapter 7 In this chapter, the story starts with the setting, where it is six years later now, where they are more mature and older. Also, there are some background information where it tells how British demons are selling drugs that is almost, in other words, just ruining the country, both including England, the demons, and the Chinese people as well. Also, it starts when Cassia is teaching her little brother a whole bunch of things. So, the theme or the mood of this chapter starts off with a calm happy style where nobody is dying that makes a sad mood. Chapter 8 In this chapter, the chapter starts with a very serious and dead emotions because the first page has the emotion like where the people are about to fight against each other for a survival where people's lives are on a bet. After, they had like a really easy kind of emotion where they did not match with the feeling in the start of the whole thing. Chapter 9 In this chapter, the start was very sad and very bad because they are really in a bad mood, in here, after the serious situation, the sad mood really starts again so, the setting is the home again. Also, the really sad thing about this chapter was this, The plot of this story was really similar to one of the other stories in the other one. Chapter 10 In this chapter, the mood in this chapter starts very serious and not fun and the intro was starting in a really cool, calm, and very serious feeling at the same time. It was really good at the same time.

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I am a Guy Black as a Elliot I Like I Love I can Beat up people I can Crush people I am a Guy

If you were only one inch tall Black White Strong Go to Everland, with no money Slim Shady Good as a icecream If you were one inch tall

I am Michael Suh I run Suh ‘s ICE CREAM STORE, there are flavors in my freezer you have never seen before, five divine creations too delicious to resist, why not do yourself a favor, try the flavors on my list: Vanilla Chocolate Rainbow Sherbet Cookie and Cream Strawberry I am Michael Suh , I run Suh 's ICE CREAM STORE, taste a flavor from my freezer, you will surely ask for more.

Haiku Poems

Little Droplets fall Down the beautiful Heaven Up in the Droplets

I like me and you You just like yourself and me. I like big dogs too

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Su Jin's Voice was not seen in any parts of the Haiku Poem. Let's go to picnic!, this is very simple, and not filled with voice Su Jin's word choice was bad compared to a Haiku poem. Her wordchoice was not as natural when it is suppose to be natural.

Elaine's voice was very much likely gone. Her voice was very calm, it was natural, but it was good overall. Elaine's Wordchoice was very good. She had a very natural saying compared to other things.

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Beautiful like bugs Beautiful weather to go to the paradise

Pretty like sun Beautiful weather to leave to the picnic sky.

Date: 060509 Michael Suh 1. Why do u think Ellen went with Lochinvar, even though she'd agreed to marry another? Because Ellen was deeply, in love with Lochinvar (eww) and she had this part where she could not do anything about it where her heart tells her to do what she wants to do from the deepest part of her heart. 2. How do the female characters and male characters actors differ in their response to Lochinvar? These guys are very differing by their personalities, they are very similar but also similar in different kinds of perspectives. 3. What does Lochinvar's behavior at the wedding reveal about his values? Because he wanted Ellen to love him with his real profile, when he was worried that Ellen is not going to be not really loving. 4. Do you think Lochinvar's actions were justified? why or why not? Yes, because he achieved his goal and he was very much likely satisfied. 5. In literature, knightly behavior is characterized by bravery and a romantic attitude toward women. How does this poem illustrate such characteristics? They are very dramatic with many different kinds of these emotions.

300409 Michael Suh I don't Understand

I don't understand why people terror why people kill why people blackmail

But most of all why people help why people save why people like their good

Blues Song Lyrics Michael Suh media type="file" key="English Song 2.m4a" I got nothin except my drowny soul She took everythin with my life my life flows on a line sharp and dangerous I never know when or where it's going to fall If it falls I'm dead My families dead Everythin's gone And I can't do Anything about it.

Middle Matters Poem Michael Suh 7A media type="file" key="English Song.m4a" Oh lovely Earth, It's in our heart, Heated with warmth, In a steady beat.

Oh kind Earth, It's in our soul, Heated with warmth, Like it rolls.

Oh pleasure Earth, It's in our life, Heated with warmth, Sharp as a knife.

Five Questions 1. I think the poem was very dramatic and very emotional, it was filled with many types of emotions that I never thought about. The poem was very dramatic by its way of rhyming. 2. Also, I think the poem was very fun because they were serious in another perspective because of what they are. Their rhymes was very good because they were hard serious words that are very good. 3. It was one of the hardest poems to understand because they were pretty good. They were changing words here and there. 4. It was very good as well for people who are young aged and they were very good for every age who can understand will be very impressed with what is there. 5. There are new kinds of writing because this was very nice at the same time.

Earth Poem Michael Suh 7A

Oh lovely Earth, It's in our heart, Heated with warmth, In a steady beat.

Oh kind Earth, It's in our soul, Heated with warmth, Like it rolls.

Oh pleasure Earth, It's in our life, Heated with warmth, Sharp as a knife.

Comment for Poetry Slam on WIKI

In this part, there was very dramatic things. The things that they are doing makes them happy and enjoy their life, so it's very good. Also, their things that they couldn't sove in their life was perfectly solved.

220409 In this video, and the poem itself was very sad. The hope of Earth saving, seems like it's hopeless but actually, it is not and it's about to come true no matter what. There is many kinds of story lines in this poem but especially the earth saving part is very heat breaking and very fun at the same time. So, this is the subject to the poem.

Poem for the Thing. 210409 I did all my homework. I picked up my toys. I empitied the trash. My bed is made. No, there are no pops. I ate all my vegetables. But everyone else is. Michael's mom doesn't make him. But, Mom. No, my dirty clothes aren't under the bed. Yes, Mom, I'm sure. Yeah, I'll be careful.. No, I won't poke an eye out. Oh, please!

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1830, Massachusetts Longfellow - first well-known poet Wall Witmen Washington Jefferson

Emily Dickinson -Woman Poet - difficult -Educations for men. Age of Thirty, she didn't go out of her house. For 26 years, didn't leave her house and wrote poems. Poems work in layers Her father was also a great man. Church was very strict

Michael Suh 200409 Dark evil, handsome running, kicking, punching I like dark chocolates killing, mocking, calling kind, mean Not sweet

Short Story Reading Assignment 190409 Michael Suh 7A

Why would Jing-Mei’s mother want to make her daughter a prodigy? This book is called ‘Two Kinds’ by Amy Tan, it’s about a girl who is being forced by her mom to be a prodigy with her mom thinking that in America, everything is possible. Her mother thinks that you can always have a successful life in America. These are stereotypes of America and this isn’t the only family that believes in it. My family also had an experience like this too. When I was fourth grade, I was hopeless with English because I couldn’t even say a word properly in English at that time. But, when my mom had a promotion, she had a suggestion to go to America, so, our family went together. As I went there, there were people with different skin color and spoke the different language. I couldn’t speak a word in English, but after a few months, I was able to speak English very fluently, and play with other friends as well. As I lived there for 1 full year, my english was improved, and was successful of going into Korean International School when I was in fifth grade. The stereotype of America is mostly successful, but it could be just applied to some people, not all. In this story, when Jing-Mei’s family was moving to America, her mother had a hope where she believed that America’s the most successful place. The story is very simple as well as the plot, Jing-Mei’s mother comes to America and starts her life again. When she does that, Jing-Mei is born. When Jing-Mei is old enough, she meets a friend who is a chess champion, after that, Jing-Mei’s mother tries to make Jing-Mei a prodigy. Her mom forces her to be a piano player and be very good at it whether in the future or now. The differences between Jing-Mei and her mother is easy to find. Jing-Mei is always thinking in a negative way because she thinks everything is mostly not possible. But Jing-Mei’s mother is different, she is always positive about what she thinks. Even when she first came to America, she came with a hope and a mind that she believed that she can succeed in America. But if Jing-Mei was the one, she would have been lacking of confidence, and she’ll be extremely poor and shy about what she will be doing. She will not have enough confidence to make the right choices or the wrong choices. The symbolism in this story is the self confidence. It represents that if you don’t have enough or any self confidence, you’ll end up being a loser at the end. There will be always failure because the result of lacking confidence will always symbolize as failure.

Seventh grade is a hard and an important year. Especially, because of the grades. This book is called ‘Seventh Grade’ by Gary Soto, and it is a story where a boy named Victor is trying to win a girl in her grade. It is important for Victor to have the most enjoyable first day. I also had a similar experience once, except that I was in a different time and a different story. When I was in fifth grade, I didn’t want to be one of the guys that doesn’t have any friends, so I started to study hard and learn some jokes that would make people laugh. That was one way that I got popular and had more friends. That was a simple way, which was very similar to Victor’s, except that we were doing it for different purposes, he wanted to look good to the girl he liked named Teressa, but I was trying to get much more popular to boys and have more friends. In this story, a boy named Victor is in love with a girl name Teressa, a cute girl in school. Everybody knows that Victor is interested in Teressa and what happens is that they have many same classes. So, Victor wants to look good with his awesome French skills or whatever other subjects. So, he tries and tries to look good in class to Teressa, and he thinks that what he does or says in class is not cool enough, when Teressa is very impressed with him. At last, he shows off his French skills and prove that he is extremely good at French because when he thought he was wrong, he was actually correct! There are two characters that are very different although they are not competing. Victor and Teressa are very different from each other. They are very different because Teressa is very active and never shy, on the other hand, Victor is very shy. But also, they are similar in other perspectives. They are similar in which they are both kind of in love. They both always like to hang out with other friends. The symbolism in this story is that always believe and try something new. For example, when Victor tried the new language, French, he was lucky and was able to look good to the girl he liked which is very good. So, if you don’t, I guess you’ll be just pure normal which is worse than better.

Why would Schatz not cry or fear until he was going to die although he thought he will die? This is book is called ‘A Day’s Wait’ by Ernest Hemingway. This book is a very cute book because the story has very good story line where the main character is so well described as a little kid. This story is kind of similar to my life’s experience once. When I was young, I went to a bus with my friends, and we donated blood. I thought, when we donate, we’ll die in a day, but we did it all together and thought we were going to die, but actually, we didn’t. We were good boys, we donated our lives to the people who really needed this blood. But, Schatz is very cute, because he thought he was going to die when he couldn’t find the differences between the temperatures of Fahrenheit and Celsius. He thought that he was going to die when his temperature was more than 100 in Fahrenheit. So, this story line is very cute and I also had a similar kind of situations. In this story, a boy named Schatz, had a cold and had to sleep in his bed. When the doctor came, the temperature was about 110 Fahrenheit degrees. When Schatz knew a information where people die if their temperature was more than 45 Celsius degrees. Schatz was waiting to be dead the whole day when his dad told what was going on and how his information was false and not going to die. When he learned a new information, he was relaxed and knew that he wasn’t going to die and will be alright. This story’s characters are hard to compare because there are only few characters in the story, Schatz, his dad, and the doctor. The people that are comparable is Schatz and his dad because they have different personalities, and perspectives of thinking. Schatz is very relaxed and has less fear than usual people. We can see that by the way he wasn’t worried as much everyone else would do in the real life when they feel and know that they are going to die. Symbolism in this story is the pride that you should always have. This story represents that you should always not scared, and smart enough to know what makes sense and what does not. So, if you make a smart choice, you will be successful but if not, you’ll be broke.

Why would Rudy make a choice that seemed impossible but successful? His decision skills are very nice. This book is called ‘A Boy and a Man’, this is about a boy named Rudy helps a man who is in danger. He was very far away from the town and had to save a person all by himself. I didn’t have a experience that was so dangerous and so heroic but I had a minor situation that was very not heroic. I wanted to drink a diet coke all day long because I was playing basketball all day long and was exhausted by all the time I put in for basketball. But, when I was in front of the store, I found a friend who was even more urgent than I am, because, he had absolutely no money, and he was playing more basketball than I did. So, I sacrificed my thirst and decided to buy him a diet coke and satisfy his thirst. That wasn’t heroic like what Rudy did to save the man but it was worth it. In this story, a man was trapped, so Rudy heard his voice, and tried helping him by tying his clothes one by one tightly and rescuing the man. There were two ways where he could have save the person, he could have went to the town, which will take two hours and would have killed the man, or just rescue him by himself. He made a quick and a smart decision to rescue him right at the place. And, it was a total success because of his decision. In here, there are two characters that can be compared. The man who was trapped and Rudy. Although Rudy was convinced to go to the town and get help, Rudy was smart enough to know that it would be impossible, so after, he made a quick decision that was very successful with everyone. In this perspective, it shows that the man was very frightened by the fact that he could die so he didn’t have enough trust in Rudy. But, Rudy was smart and strong enough to solve that whole problem by himself. In this story, the symbolism is fear and choice making. If you make the wrong choice, you’ll be punished with fear. But if you make the right choice, you’ll be granted with the better thing. Like Rudy and the man, they made the right choice, so that is what the result was.

I bet that Felix and Antonio’s friendship is too great. This kind of relationship show that they are very friendly no matter what happens. This book is called ‘The Amigo Brothers’ by Piri Thomas. This book shows the characteristics between a very close relationship just by friends. I didn’t have a competition with any of my friends but if I imagine a situation like this one, I wouldn’t have acted like this. My friend and I would more likely compete against each other and have a clean game and promise each other to not have any feelings after the game. But this friendship is very particular, I would at least hear the winner of the game and than leave. But these guys just leave the game without hearing the winner, when they put so much effort in the game. There were two boys named Felix and Antonio. They were the best friends ever. Also, they were excellent boxers as well, they had the abilities to win the golden glove, they both went into the tournament, and promised to not stay together until the tournament starts, of course, they were both in the competition. They both had a perfect and a clean game, but when the referee was about to tell who was the winner. Both Felix and Antonio walked out of the ring and walked to home together. The story ends with no champion. But, they were very good friends until the end. First of all, Felix and Antonio are both very similar but not much of a different people. They both were amazing at boxing, and they are both similar from their personalities, because they always treat each other so good, and be kind to each other. At least in the championships, they could have found out the real winner but their friendship was so great that they didn’t even bother to hear the winner and just go out of the ring happily. There is a saying where if you want to look like the guy you like, you turn like that person. I think that applied in this situation. They were both amazing at boxing, and their personalities were similar because they always see each other the most. The symbolism of this story is probably friendship. This friendship shows how much of happiness you can receive from the good things with you do with your friends. Like Felix and Antonio, they don’t have to worry about the result in the boxing ring, because they are happy enough.

160409 MICHAEL SUH Alliteration: Billy Buck is buckity bick. Assonance: The July slime lied to me. Onomatopoeia: The water splashed and the shrimp popped. Imagery: Elliot is like a chocolate. Metaphors: Elliot is not so white but just in the middle. Simile: Elliot is as black as a dark chocolate. Hyperbole: Elliot is as black as the black hole in a galaxy. Personification: The sky roared as the rain seemed like an waterfall. Allusion: Elliot has a artwork as good as an Da Vinci Code. Synecdoche: You got shoes, man? Conceit: My heart is as hard as a new sword. Paradox: School is scary. Symbolism: Sun is a bright lamp. Antithesis: Your face is extraordinary. David Lee is very handsome. His face is known world wide. Although he has pimples, It's better than being a pickle.

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160409 Michael Suh Elliot's poem His skin is like chocolate. It's dark and sweet. His hair are like hairball. Dirty and Curly. His legs are short as a used hammer Strong but short His arms are long like a monkey smart but useless. His heart holds someone's life that is black as a dark chocolate. He lives in a cave and eats chocolate.

14/05/09 Blues how to make a blues music. 1. Find your Feelings. 2. Express yourself 3. Repeat it 4. Rhyme it. over and over again. 5. Name the tune. 6. Now, keep the beat from now on.

Michael's Self Portrait By Michael Suh

My hand is like a used axe. Not sharp but useful and still works. My feet are like sharp shoes. They are fast but dirty My toenails are big as king kongs. Strong but Useless My face is small as a bean Ugly but useful. My heart holds the life of the world. The feeling is smooshy that is clear as a crystal. I live in heaven.

090409 Seung's Thought on Poem: Some Mother goddess beauty describes the beauty of diamond 'Please laugh' means the shine in diamond

1st pers on point of view: I or those kind of actions 3rd person point of view: Indirect View alliteration: Repeation allusion: Imagination biography: Website character trait: information about character climax of a novel: Strongest fable: Don't know fiction: not true flashback: going back aand forth foreshadowing: Knowing the future free-verse: Free Throw

Rhyming Words Harry hairy Marry Carry Berry Cherry Jerry Very Bury Perry

Date 010409 Michael Suh The word choice was fluent because it was comfortable and relaxing to the reader. Example: Continuously: The things were much better because it connected the sentences very well

boring to good Date: 310309 1. hard-difficult 2. good-cracking 3. stay-remain 4. great-outstanding 5. normal-average 6. say-state 7. making-producing 8. full-inundated 9. imagined-fancied 10. eat-gnawed

Writing Gym Date: 310309 1. Suppose you had invented a time machine. Write a story about what you did with it. I am the world's most famous scientist who had invented the world's first time machine. The invention made is called Michaeltimetransfer. This Michaeltimetransfer has the ability to go all the way back to the time when nothing existed, this time machine needs so much energy and they need to use the energy of the person that is riding it. The machine takes you to nowhere and self destruct himself that's shorter than 1 minute. I decided to find out the existence and the study of dinosaurs. I was seeing the usual dinosaurs but I saw a extraordinary and grumpy looking dinosaur, it's called an Elliosauraus.

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When I go to the grocery mart, I think I'll buy things such as chocolate milk powder. Because they are my favorite food ever in my life. Whenever I'm tired, I eat a cup of that. The energy is full after just one drop. It feels so good after all. The powder is so good because it seems like my life's finally at peace, I think that is my final result.

I, Juan de Pareja 200309 1st grade grading Voice (5/5) From a 1st grader's perspective, the voice was excited and enthusiastic for a 1st grader. Evidence: The exclamation mark had full emotion A Examples: It was a blast! A

1st grade grading Voice (3/5) From a 1st grader's perspective, it was still bad. Evidence: The voice was blank. A Examples: He was in a yellow blanket. A

1st grade grading Voice (5/5) In terms of length, it was good. Evidence: Good simile! A Examples: He is soft, and his cheeks are fat like my brother’s. A

I, Juan de Pareja Report Michael Suh 7A The life of Juan de Pareja starts in the seventeenth century in the middle of a country called Spain. Juan is an ordinary African slave that doesn’t know his abilities in a topic that he likes. Almost every 2 chapters, the setting changes because of miserable events that makes the settings about this book changes very frequently and makes it less boring. Other books are mostly boring and not fun, but this time, his skills were so good because what what will happen every time you read. As I’ve said, the story takes place in a country called Spain. Spain is a very cultured civilization that has many nobles and people like the paintings. The rich people or the king is always asking Diego Valaquez, the master of Juan, to draw because of his impressing skills and nice paintings. An artist like Valaquez was welcomed in that period of time to anywhere because at that time, there were many people that enjoyed the subject, art and people thought it was enjoyable. There was nobody who didn’t like art unless they were poor. The main character, Juan, goes through uncountable numbers of tragic moments. For example, Juan was only a little boy but was captured as an slave with his mother died. His life after was slave days. He went through all around Europe because every one of his master was dead because of a disease. So, he had traveled around Europe, meeting new masters and friends. His strongest revolt against his life was his final master. The final master’s name is Diego Valaquez, he was one of the most famous artist at that current time. Until then, Juan did not know what kind of abilities he had. His abilities were amazing, a talent that he had never found before was the subject, art. He had talents in drawing. As a slave of a great artist, he was learning all kinds of things secretly and naturally. As he builds his skills up until he had a really has the skills of a real artist, he is now getting trained to be an famous artisan, a talent that was never found and a situation that was so hard because of the slavery. Although, it was such an hard dream to make it he made it in such a weird and discouraging situation. Since that he was a slave, people pointed at him and probably called him names, and specially he was the first African painter that wasn’t respected by other people, but he stood up through all of those pain and went through them and now he is a successful man. He also had a belief that was secretly kept to only himself. He thought that himself shouldn’t be a slave, he believed that he should be treated more nicely and more respected. That’s what made him strong enough to survive in that kind of society. Like I’ve said, this story begins with a little boy named Juan. He became a slave, he wanders around because he doesn’t know how to speak the language or do anything to communicate. He was sold many times after his masters all died, until a new master named Diego Valaquez. He was an famous artist from Spain that drew many paintings of the king or upper class people. But after working for Valaquez for a time, he learns how to draw by just looking and helping his art supplies. Himself finds out that he has a talent, Valaquez finds out that Juan has a talent. He went popular and popular because of his surviving skills between many talented artists that are not African or a slave. Probably, Juan is the first one ever. He keeps on leading the competition because of his amazing skills, he has used his hidden talent that nobody knew until one day, himself draw on a piece of paper. The dream was started as a little shooting star but now it’s an exploded, shining, gigantic sized star that was amazing throughout his life. In the life of Juan, imagine how much pain he went through to be one of the top classed people at that time. In my opinion, the pain will be uncountably a lot. The pain of physical appearances are minor but I think his insides, his feelings would have hurt so much because of the fact that he is an slave who has succeeded with people depressing him everywhere he goes. That is not how a human should be treated but, that was how he was treated, and he went through it. He sounds like a super hero but he’s not. He’s a superhero of his mind, because the things he went through are things that makes himself proud and not scared about the fact that you’ll be attacked. The fear will be minor after all the pain. Imagine the teacher of Juan, Diego Valaquez, he wouldn’t have gone through pain but he was a big help to Juan, he was an important character to the story as well as Juan. It was an multi helping person. If there wasn’t Diego’s help I think Juan wouldn’t have been on the spot at the current time. Also, there are many other characters that come out in here because all of them has got to do with Juan. They are all very important because it gives Juan character for him. It is nice for him to do that.

180309 Warm-up Michael Suh 7A Yoonha's writing was perfect because the reader was never board of the writing, because it was so simple. Yoonha's SF was not that good because it was too simple. The Fluency could not be seen. Voice: The doctor might clean the bathroom and organize the soap, toilet seat, toilet paper etc. SF: He would make the bathroom very organized.

160309 Word Choice Prompt Michael Suh In the deadly night, what could a terrified fish do in a airplane? In a airplane, there was a terrified fish named Elliot. He had the skin color of black and he was amazingly dumb. His dumbness had made every one of his owners dump him alive into the toilet, but amazingly, he survives somehow. Finally, he was locked in a bag of his owner, he knew nothing about what was going on in the airplane. The plane was crashing into the middle of Manhattan when Elliot could hear nothing nor he was able to do anything. So he crashed, since that he was a fish, he was swimming all over the ocean after the crash, he learned new things about the wild life. Three days later, he was starving, he went to hunt bacterias. He was so dumb that he couldn't even catch one. But, suddenly, a quick spark flashed and than, he was dead. He was eaten by the shark. When he woke up, he was in heaven, but, there was no water, so he just died, he reapeated that forever and ever.

My 5 Paragraphed Essay

Voice - Sentences are constructed in a way that underscores and enhances the meaning. Example - Since that, robots don’t have minds or hearts like we do, instead, they have a battery and a hard drive.

Word Choice - Sentences are usually constructed correctly; they hang together; they are sound. Example - Secondly, when all these emotions are gone, the result of our geniuses will be unbelievably great because all we do is learn and use what you learn.

Fluency - Sentences are choppy, incomplete, rambling or awkward; they need work. Phrasing does not sound natural. The patterns may create a sing-song rhythm, or a chop-chop cadence that lulls the reader to sleep. Example - The various jobs can be cashers in stores or other things like it. This can lead where the people that had those jobs will lose that job in which they will not be able to live on their own anymore.

Something that annoys me alot is probably the people who keeps on talking that is something bad about me. The people who are amiably controlled are so good but the naughty ones are just not possible. After them talking, I need convalescence to recover my feelings.Also, the people who are cynically proven that they are annoying are really the worst. The fervor that they show to us make our feelings all grumpy. The insolent behaviors of those people will temper you so fast. I wish there is a proxy for every one of those people. I want to make their faces all rotund by punchinig because I am mad aat them so much. The somberly people should all be vanished. The stupor is proven.

If I was the Principal of our school, I would change such rules, I will make a rule where I will let students speak Korean everytime. When everybody speaks Korean, I wish the teachers will never complain back to me unless the students have said something so bad. Also I wish the students were able to speak freely with liberty and pride. I wish everyone will be able to be free!

__//**Write about what you think the world will be like in 100 years**//__ Writing gym Station #1 no. 1 Michael Suh 7A 3/8

In 100 years, what would the future look like? I think it will be an emotionless world that will have everything in robots. All the technology is developed that we don’t need any cashiers in stores or anything. The development will be so great that we don’t need emotions in the world because of the robots. What three possibilities are there after 100 years?

First, I think the world will be emotionless. Since that, robots don’t have minds or hearts like we do, instead, they have a battery and a hard drive. They have the same jobs except that they don’t have the emotions like ours that make us laugh, cry, shout of madness, or other emotions as well. The emotions can make us feel in different ways in various kinds of paths. The paths are by getting taught, scolded, or many other things. And many things occur in a system called school. The school contains many ways where you feel sad after a bad grade, or you get a good grade and you’ll be happy. The consequence where all these emotions are gone will lead to a global crisis because everyone will never have fun and challenge their own life.

Secondly, when all these emotions are gone, the result of our geniuses will be unbelievably great because all we do is learn and use what you learn. The emotionless world will be so bad. Like I said, there are consequences of what can happen. In my opinion, the world will be filled with robots for various jobs. The various jobs can be cashers in stores or other things like it. This can lead where the people that had those jobs will lose that job in which they will not be able to live on their own anymore. In this consequence, the government or anything has to support these people in anyway. Or else, the people will revolt against these robots, which can lead to a crisis.

Therefore, I believe that the world in 100 years will turn like this, in a negative way. The negative way should be stopped at the present moment to prevent what kind of bad things will happen. The bad things could happen in 100 years and we need to stop it.

Chapter 8 3 Questions 3 Vocabulary 1 Summary I, Juan de Pareja Michael Suh 7A 030309 Three Questions 1. Who did Juan’s master paint in the palace? 2. How did the author describe Juan’s master painting King’s children? 3. What did the young man 14 years later recommend to the Master? Three Vocabularies 1. What is “grinding”? 2. What is “approvingly”? 3. What is “underlay”? Three sentence Summary It starts with the serious moment of Juan’s Master performing to the King of drawing portraits of them. But after, the time and the setting changes, now, it gets into deeper and complex information about Juan’s Master’s true love. At the end, it ends with the Master’s curiosity.

March 2 2009 10 Question of chapter 7 I, Juan de Pareja Michael Suh 7A What is traitor? What is a frock? What is sealed? 1. Why did Juan receive the kitten? 2. What is Sevile? 3. What did the Rubens come for? 4. When is Juan going to the palace. 5. Who was the person that talked to Juan? 6. What is the name of the church Juan goes to? 7. Where does Diego live now?

February 26th, 2009 Writing Gym 1. Write about what you think the world will be like in 100 years. In 2108, I think all the teachers will be robots. The life will be boring because they teach without any emotion and they would not have any personality. I think the robots would have bunch of information but I think I wouldn't learn anything because it is going to be too boring. Nothing will go inside of my brain. It was fun talking with teachers right now because they have emotions that we can be happy with and enjoy. But, if robots teach which will not have any emotions and make us so emotionless and bored. I think rather getting smarter, this time we will be very dumb because of the emotionless teaching style and us getting so badly treated. If we learn information. I think we will hear from one side of our ear and leak out to the other side.

Michael Suh 7A February 25, 2009 Recipe A recipe for Peace and hapiness

Ingredients:

1 gram of tiredness 1 pound of Sleep 2 teaspoons of good dream 3 kilograms of a good bed

Steps

1. On that day, you need to spend a lot of energy to make 1 gram of tiredness 2. You mix your 1 gram of tiredness and 1 pound of sleep. 3. Stir with the 2 teaspoons of good dream in order to be mixed well. 4. You need to lay on 3 kilograms of good bed. 5. Sleep!

Februray 13, 2009 PP Spanish bio [[file:Biography of Alonzo Cano.ppt]