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June 3, 2009

a. I liked the character Foxfire due to the fact that he like me, had a laid back mind that would think of things that are beyond the world that average people. We are also misunderstood in our ways of thinking as we are cast aside by the world no matter what we do. And the final reason is the fact that he was able to be accepted at the end due to the fact that he was able to be successful and get his place in the world. And I admire that fact.

b. The three most important moments were the; the death of mother
 * the leaving of Foxfire
 * the message and the money given by Foxfire

c. I am different from the main character in a way that we are of a different gender. As we are also different in a way that she is confident while I am not. Also, we are different in a way that she is not lazy while I am.

d. The setting was in their village, their home, Uncle Windy's home, their fields and the market

e. family is important, get over your losses, move on

f. it has suspense it holds meanings it has some interesting religious facts

The twentisecond and the other chapter of the Serpent's Children

Soon, a heavy rain came down which ruined the rice crops and they stared at it in dismay as they were helpless to do anything to it. What was worse was that they didn't reserve any money either so it didn't matter as well. And at the end, a letter came from Foxfire that was very late since it was about his days in the ship. From what I saw it was terrible but in the end, it turned out very well.

The twentifirst chapter

In this chapter, Dusty's assault continues as he prepares to throw another knife which was delyed for too long by Cassie so with the gun cocked in his hand, he aimed at him let him go due to the fact that they use to be comrades. So he had no choice but to retreat so he retreated.

The twentieth chapter

This chapter is about what happend afterwords as Cassie's father bought his demon gun and everyone lived happily as Cassie's lived to their pleasure. Soon, everyone in the village was talking about the gold mountain as many of them were planning to go overseas as well. However, Cassie tried to warn them of the risk but they only thought that she was just trying to get rid of her brother's competition. So they planned to go anyway. But later, Dusty had flung a dagger at her father which gravely wounded him.

The nineteenth chapter of the Serpent's children

This chapter was only about the letter that Foxfire sent about everything that he wanted to say. So typically, he wanted to tel them that he is having a good time and that he wants to apologize to his father as he is very sorry.

The eighteenth chapter of the Serpent's children

Several months, years passed after Foxfire left the house to the mountain of gold. The house was getting quiter and everything was boring and it wasn't as it used to be. So life became harder in sense of food and in missing a family member. But one day as Cassie went to the clerk, he gave her a package that landed with jingle. And he told her that it was all money so she quickly returned to her village to spread the word of this incident. The incident of this money and the fact that Foxfire is alive as well. When Father came to see this, he went to their courtyard to actually see it in private as he refused the offers that they come in and see it as well. And they saw what happened they were mostly happy about the fact that he survived the trip and made plenty of money and gold as well. But what was even more surprising was the fact that there was a letter with words on it. Which was unusual for common people like them so they were plannig to ask Uncle Black to read it to them.

The fifteeth, sixteenth, and the seventeenth chapter of the Serpent's children

These three chapters were very exciting as I forgot to notice to divide the chapters. Anyway, At first, these three chapters start with how cousin spider finally returns home to them but with news and friends that will gravely effect them. What was it was that Spider decided to create or support the revolution in his own way by teaming up with bandits. However, he was now going around gathering food and provisions for war as they were robbing the townspeople of food. But father wouldn't give up his food as they needed it very badly. However, Foxfire continued to say that we should just give them what they want and leave. But his father wouldn't listen so he threw him self on him which gave the bandits enough distraction to take the rice, beat up Cassie and Foxfire's father, tie all of them, badly wound them, and almost rape Cassie. So Cassie woke up seeing a destroyed house with a half filled basket of rice that is now spilled on the floor. As they were untieing each other, they started to smell that the bandits have started a fire in the village which caused the people to lose the precious water which everone was running so short on. But during the time they wre untieing themselves, Father and Foxfire argued about father's life as they fought and argued about the work and how father and mother was only following a dream that would leave them with nothing like how it is now. Father became so angry that he disowned him saying that he no longer has a son. As soon as Father was untied, Foxfire started to back away in fear defending himself saying that he was only doing what he truly thought and should happen. But Father walked off saying that he doesn't have a child named Foxfire and told Cassie to join him as fast as he can in order to put out the fire. But after their father left, Foxfire asked if she thought he was a coward as well. She said an answer that she would regret later as she said that it was true. And left him there to help her father and left his brother tied and alone at home. Once the fire was out, the people started a need to blame someone for this incident. So the blame went from Spider to Uncle Windy, to Father as Uncle Windy started to say things about how he made Spider spoiled. But then, uncle black and Cassie were able to convince the angry mob when Father replied by saying that he doesn't have a son. Which made the people drop their objects which they were about to throw as they suddenly pitied him. But after that, Aster, Father, and Cassie discover that Tiny and Foxfire had disappeared which caused them to go on a frantic search in order to find them. But later, they noticed as they guessed that Foxfire and Tiny would be heaing toward the land with the golden mountains. So they search for them even in the city but they couldn't find them. But a few days later, Tiny returned with a notice that he signed his name as his bond in order to send him to this new land called America. But due their guilt at the thought of him being carted away to be a slave so they bonded their name instead with more money as well. So as their last dinner before slavery, they decicded to a good dinner to get rid of some of theri pain as well.

The fourteenth chapter

It was already autumn and they had the worst harvest of the year which couldn't have occured at a better time. However, they lost all theri harvest to the golden cat who gathered them as tax. So later that day, all they ate was the weed soup. But luckily unlike other families, they did not have to eat grass soup which was a slow way of starvation. However, Foxfire would continue thinking about the golden mountains while Cassie and her father thought about their mother. But then suddenly, Foxfire told them that harmony was selling Peony so everyone was really shocked. But then, father took down the last bit of their memory of their mother, the window as Cassie cried, her father took down the window saying that her mother would have sold these than let her children starve. But no matter how much Cassie told him that it was his fault for muttering and souttering and saying things about the golden mountains that this happened. But consciously knowing that she would have done that, she had to forgive them.

The thirteenth chapter

In this chapter, Cassie notices things about those who are on the streets as Foxfire told her that he was about to give them some water as they were limiting the amount of water they drink as well. But later, the buyer came to the house as a small argument about if they are going to sell the things or not. But eventually, out of the three items that they didn't want to sell, two of them were sold with the table that they wanted to sell in order to support themselves and be able to survive in these harsh times. But now they were able to survive as they had the money to by the seeds and other food as well. But it may get harder to the fact that Foxfire could not stop thinking about the land with the mountains of gold.

The twelvth chapter

Everyone in the village was talking about the golden mountains and other things that Harmony told about this strange new land called the America. They were discussing this so much that Foxfire woudn't stop talking about it until Cousin Spider came along. At first they were shocked since they didn't have visitors in a long while. But they suddenly had a visitor who was kicked out of his family. But what was shocking was the fact that he appeared half starved in rags. Everyone was so shocked to see him like this and to see him. But they tried to keep secret from them that they were running short on supplies due to the phoenixes. But the discosion led to their talk about the white devils with multicolored hair, their weapons like the //shotgun// and their land of gold/the mountains of gold.

The eleventh chapter of the serpent's children

After their conflict with the phoenixes, they decided to examine, their farms to check for damages since the farms are what the people rely one to support themselves with food and money as most of them are farmers. Luckily, their five farms were luckily barely damaged as it was good enough. Soon, they met Peony who refused to run away with Cassie from the matchmaker before. She started asking Cassie about all these things with a clear purpose on what she is trying to accomplish. As always, she acts cute in front of people to gain food that people were lacking. But they gave it to her because they felt sorry for her but Cassie didn't feel that way. But in order to get rid of her, she gave her some food so that she will be gone. As Foxfire would also give her some food as well. But suddenly a crowd appeared and as soon as Foxfire saw the crowd, he ran toward the crowd curious about what it was about. A minute later, he returned with news that Harmony has returned in rags and being as skinny as a bone. So, Cassie took pity on her and promised to give her a squash. Then, she asked Aster why she falls for it every time, she said that it was because she had a big heart. Then they noticed that Foxfire and Tiny had ran off to see what happened and hear Harmony's tales.

The tenth chapter, the serpent's children

due to the loss of vegetables, everyone was dying of disease and scurvy as the remaining folks would try to farm their ruined land which was trampled underfoot by the Phoenixes. And Aster bought a land next to her allowing her to farm next to her and talk to her. But today, she was complaining about her ruined crops while Aster came to farm her land. And then she thought Aster went through even more problems than her since she lost all her relatives except Tiny died of scurvy and the disease. So she had no right to complain but the situation and it is just terrible. Worse than ever before. Their pride shattered and lands destroyed and with diseases and scurvy going around everywhere, it was terrible. Just terrible.

ninth chapter, the serpent's children

Cassie came up to the village only to see his father on his knees and hands. And the events that followed lowered his pride even more. And Foxfire ran away almost being hit by Cassie. And Foxfire even objected to father and Cassie following them but he was just left behind.

The 8th chapter of the serpent's children

This chapter was about the battle started at the previous chapter and Cassie and her family fighting them off. and a soldier breaking their father's pride by beating him.

The seventh chapter of the serpent's children

This chapter takes place several years after the last chapter as Foxfire is now taller than his father, but none of the physically and mental wounds healed. So in order to prepare for raids and invasions, he is trying his best to rebuild the town's militia. Also, in order to make sure of Cassie and Foxfire's safety, he decided to train them too. But since Foxfire became older, his expectations were even higher than Cassie's. But no matter how many times they performed the excercies, he it always turn out in a weird way for Foxfire so he is forced to work even harder. But what he really wants to do is just float in his imaginary world. So he was always scorned.

The 6th chapter of the children of the serpent

But then, a miracle and a terrible thing happened. Father and Spider finally returned from their battle against the white demons with ill news. It was that the king made peace with the white demons after their victory in a single battle. However, they lost all the other battles against the white demons as well. But when Uncle Windy's deeds reached Spider's ears, he caused himself to be kicked out and live in Cassie's house for a while.

The fifth chapter of the children of the serpent

Within this chapter, Cassie and Firefox decides to escape this torture by escaping to their home, the home where there mother used to wait for them. So they slept the night there. Then, the next morning, Uncle Windy started banging at the gate ordering them to open the door. So with her homemade spear (a stick with a knife on the end) started jabbing at the hole in the gate making him jump back. So he tried to climb the wall only to jump back at the sight of Cassie's spear. So they gave up. So the next day after that, Foxfire and Cassie headed to their field with manure to harvest and grow them. While on their way, they met Uncle Windy who was saying things like how they would never be able to do it until Aster and her brothers in law came in and helped them. But then, a miracle and a terrible thing happened. Father and Spider finally returned from their battle against the white demons with ill news. It was that the king made peace with the white demons after their victory in a single battle. However, they lost all the other battles against the white demons as well.

The fourth chapter of the children of the serpent

The characters in this chapter were:Aunt Piety, Cassie, Firefox, Uncle Windy, Aunt Patience, Lily, Peony

This chapter was about how Aunt Piety was trying to turn her into a 'woman' by sending her to Aunt Patience the matchmaker. A matchmaker is the person in charge of the wedding and etc. So Cassie was being 'trimmed' while Firefox was forced to leave. Cassie had to change the size of her feet and other stuff she didn't like. So she ended up attacking the matchmaker. What a sight it was for a little girl to attack the matchmaker who was in charge of all wedding preparations. Cassie wouldn't stop scratching, kicking and other brutal attacks as well. Aunt Piety was so outraged that she started slapping Cassie while her pour of outrage continued. She even admitted the fact that it felt very good. Once it stopped, every member of the clan rushed into Uncle Windy's courtyard. Soon, Aunt Luckless strode into the room screaming the three words HOW---DARE---YOU!!! Soon, they dragged me away from Aunt Patience as the other member of the clan tried to help her. While the adult members of the tribe helped Aunt Patience, She discussed some things with her cousin Peony. Suddenly, Firefox tried to throw himself at the matchmaker to help her bound sister only to be blocked by Aunt Piety's arm into his stomach. Cassie screamed mother as she was carried away by other adults.

The third chapter of the children of the serpent

The characters in this chapter are: Cassie, her brother Firefox, her mother, and Aster, Aunt Piety, Uncle Windy

In this chapter, the main character's best friend Aster comes to her house. Aster is part of a group of people called the strangers. They were the people that lived on the coast that were forced to leave when Manchos took over the area while the old emperor controls some of the islands. Aster was engaged to Tiny since they were infants so she was living with them. However, Aster was more like a sister to Tiny then a wife. She was here to give some soup since her family heard that Cassie's mother was sick. While Cassie's mother was about to eat the soup, they were starting to discus about the harvesting season since they will have to plow their fields soon. So Cassie and Foxfire decided to help her. Then the next day, it was the day of harvest. They started to work hard on the fields but Cassie's mother did most of the work. Then, Aunt Piety came by and they started chatting until Uncle Windy came to 'keep things in order' since that's what he always try to do. But while walking to their special field, Cassie's mother fell down on the road with blood trickling down her mouth. Then, in a few minutes later, she died.

The second chapter of the children of the serpent

The characters in this chapter is: Cassie, her father, her little brother foxfire, her mother, and The characters in the mother's story who were the Silver Serpent and the traveler.

In this chapter, the mother was telling a story about their ancestry and why why they should not fight amongst themselves. Cassie was insulting her little brother continuously calling him an idiot. Soon, their sick mother woke from her sleep. Because she felt bad about waking her up, she told her brother that it was his fault for waking her up. Upon, hearing this, her mother decided to tell the story about the Silver Serpent. It was how man was deceived and fell in love with the ghost. And they lived together until a monk came by and told the traveler that she was a ghost of a snake which was true. However, he eventually went back to her and they had children who became their grandfather. Then, she told them about how they should not fight amongst each other even if you are part of the Young clan. Because Cassie and Foxfire was still a stranger to them.

The first chapter, The Serpent's Children

The characters are: Cassie, her father, her brother, and her brother. It is introducing the story by talking about how their father was off to fight the white demons who came into their land. They were actually British soldiers sent here to reinforce and conquer this area of the continent. But all the men were sent in order to live and make sure that they will eventually have the power to vanquish the new emperor. However, the father is worried since he knows that the mother is very sick. She may even become paralyzed. So the father was worried. However, the father still leaves also knowing that she is the person with the most spirit within the village.

presentation notes

David & Mike
 * Quatrain
 * a single stanza with 4 lines
 * used in ancient greece and rome
 * still used in other countries
 * iambic pentameter = \/\/\/\/\/ = 5
 * just have four lines

Johnny Park & Michael
 * Ballad
 * British and Irish first
 * liked all around the world
 * they tell a story / music
 * mostly fills a page
 * it can be a short story
 * they can be sang as a song



Quiz 1. seasons 2. ? 3. ?

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May 14, 2009

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May 13, 2009

My shadow wears a black version of my clothes with a shirt and pants and she knows the order of things he hair is like mine. Black with the exact outline of my here My shadow is a imitation of me he movements are the same as mine with the same walk and the same outline some say he is me!

If I were in charge of the world kill all those oppose me slaghter the rebellion aid those who are on my side If I were in charge of the world

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If I were in charge of the world You wouldn't starve You wouldn't have to buy overpriced materials You wouldn't have to worry about crime Or worry about assassinations ======

If I were in charge of the world.
Instant I Remember Poem I remember when i was flying I remember the birds being shock I remember i remember the passengers staring in awe and i remembered that i forgot to bring a parachute I remember that i was scared I remember endlessly falling I remember 100 meters closer even the passengers of a nearby plane seemed scared I remember that i woke up just before impact But my favorite memory’s yet to come



May 11, 2009

The sun goes down over the hill down my eyes below my chin below my waist under my feet The darkness comes and plays in the sky imitating the sun while it's fast asleep

The lightening struck it puts everyone in fear it is lightening

Julia Out for a picnic but see bugs and mosquitoes they go back inside
 * 1: 3, it is the letter f since it's not very.......good.

I got the bad flu I am sick for many weeks So I die later
 * 2: 3, and of letter f.

Christina
 * 1: 3, it is very simple.

Spring time is coming We are going picnics too run around outside

to imagine the picture.
 * 2: 5, it is very good since you used very high vocabulary and it was easy

Like always spring comes With all my friends I go out We play at Coax

May 7, 2009 Spring poem X2

spring is coming coming with the gentle wind waking animals

warm breeze warms us all with the warm breeze blowing by the spring has come back

due May 7, 2009 1. Ellen went with Lochinvar because she loved him more.

2. The male and the female's thoughts about Lochinvar is different since the male dislikes him while the female thought ' twas he was better by far'.

3. Lochinvar's behavior showed that he treasures his love above all. Since all he talked about love, and how he loved her, how he would do anything and so forth.

4. Lochinvar's actions were justified for many reasons. One of the reasons are due to the fact that Ellen actually loved him more than she loved her groom who did not even speak or confront Lochinvar.

5. He is a knight so i think he is brave and etc. for two reasons. One is because he is brave enough to crash a wedding and just drop in there asking for a hand in marriage. And the other reasons is because he said that he would do anything for her and etc, etc.

April 30, 2009 i am a mortal who lives a normal life i am a human who lives as a boy. i am a boy who is a son. i am a son who does not always listen. i am a student who dislikes studying i am a boy who enjoys reading i am a boy who enjoys playing games i am a human, who lives a normal life yet so different from others.

April 30, 2009 i don't know why why people die why we must fight why they must fight

i don't know why why we kill why we save why we live

i truly don't know why why we are alive why we think why we live why we struggle to live

due April 30, 2009 media type="file" key="blues song.aif"

April 28, 2009 middle matters poem Robby Hwang (please keep it anonymus)

//__tainted heart__// delicate love chained her always manipulated by her god she laughed she ached she cried than none consumed by bitterness and sorrow and heart tainted by hate the delicate heart was no more

media type="file" key="English (earth poem).m4a" April 23, 2009 Earth day poem

Earth is dying people are crying the trees are falling the rivers are drying the animals are dying people are polluting.

save the Earth Earth is your home your home is being crushed the floor is scarred the roof is being torn apart

save the Earth not after long after the lands will be gone nothing will be left what will you do?

April 23, 2009 comments

The video was very boring. The worst video that I've ever seen. I did learn about the Slam thingy but it convinced be not to buy it and not to participate in it.

April 21, 2009 paragraph for poem

The poem was saying how our difference was making a poem. How we come in different sizes, shapes, colors, thoughts. but the one thing that made us same was that we were human. So the poem is saying that we are the same and that we would be in harmony if we forget about the difference on the outside. Since were practically same in the inside

April 21, 2009 list poem

socks

dirty on your feet torn apart by pavements and shoes ensnares your feet warms your feet all cozy and soft some are small so many designs so many kinds so many colors protects your feet from the shoe better have the right kinds for the right seasons or else.....your feet will be miserable for a while

April 20, 2009 notes of video


 * not all of the famous people were rich while some were poor.
 * Walt Wittman
 * women did not write poems
 * Emily Dikinson wrote poems as everyone was racist.
 * not a lot of people knew she new she was a poet.
 * most of her poems were not published
 * She was a recluse
 * William Longfellow
 * was sensitive nature
 * most people did not notice her talent

April 20, 2009 diamante Snakes dangerous, poisonous slithering, curving, hunting the hunt for the mouse has begun scurrying, escaping, fearing cute, exhausted Mouse

April 20, 2009 acrostic

Sticky A treasure of the past. Prison insects of old

April 20, 2009 There is a curse that binds the school Within it's leathery pages. That holds information that is needed to teach. a single page hold tiresome papers that tries to cures all that studies. holding things we would rather avoid. Can you still remember when you hated it?

April 16, 2009 see the city sound a scream after sleet Kim, Tim, Jim and Bim went for a swim. The water trickled and the wind blew softly. The water roared across the beach. He's speed resembles that of a cheetah. She was as fast as a cheetah. The city shone like the sun. The wind screamed. He walked like tarzan. Be glad that you have a roof over your head. Sweet dark send me to bitter heaven. After all, dark chocolate is awesome. not knowing is knowing. It just depends to what you know. Fire will eventually die out so enjoy it while you can. You can try to keep it alive but it will and has to die. Smooth boy!
 * alliteration
 * assonance
 * onomatopoeia
 * imagery
 * metaphors
 * simile
 * hyperbole
 * personification
 * allusion
 * synecdoche
 * conceit
 * paradox
 * symbolism
 * antithesis

April 16, 2009 He's the target for all the insults being addicted to cars and rumors floating around him even I think that he is strange and perhaps even more he's annoying and he threatens others maybe it would be better if he shut his mouth.

April 14, 2009 --the blues can be any emotions(consists) --first must think about emotions --write the first sentence --the first sentence shows your emotion --repeat most of the lines --rhyme(words)/use --name the tune/note/music --continue this process over and over to create more tunes using the 12 bar blues.

April 14, 2009

Feet my feet are torn as a the ground. bare and wounded, never to be healed. unable to do anything I just watch and fear as my feet are torn day by day. as they are torn from day to day I wonder what might come for it maybe blood or the scalpel and knife. I truly wish that nothing like that will come my way.

Head my head spins in an endless cycle. thinking the same things over and over. felling the same things over and over. nothing happens and I wonder over and over. my head spins in an endless cycle. over and over.

Legs my legs are tired carrying a load a load that never goes away it has to carry his load that commands it. always carrying it. It must be tired. it also caries whatever his master wishes from bags, to clothes, to toys,and much more. my legs are tired but i don't want to give it a break.

April 10, 2009

__//**The girl with the blood thirsty hawk**//__

a girl had a blood thirsty hawk Its head was sharp as a hook. And everywhere that a girl went The hawk was sure to go.

It followed her to school one day Which was against the rules. It made the children run away and scream To see a hawk at school.

April 9, 2009 //__tainted heart__// delicate love chained her always manipulated by her god she laughed she ached she cried than none consumed by bitterness and sorrow and heart tainted by hate the delicate heart was no more


 * comment by Mr. Schwagler:** //I really liked the rhythm of this poem. I think the poem is about how it feels to have a broken heart. Favorite phrase 'manipulated by her god'.//

due April 8, 2009 1st person point of view: where the author is the main character. Often used with the word I.

3rd person point of view: is where the author addresses the others using he, she, they, etc.

alliteration: is a type of writing that is also known as tongue twisters. It is when you repeat the first letter that is a consonant in a sentence.

allusion: when you say something without saying it specifically but still can be understandable.

biography: biography is a type of story that is non-fiction. They are stories that tell about another person's life.

character traits: character traits are traits that describes the character and his/her nature and personality.

climax of novel: this the area when the whole thing takes place. It's where all the pressure of the previous sections explode to create the most engaging and interesting section of the book.

fiction: fiction is a type of story that is not true so it is made up.

flashback: this the part of the story when it introduces the past of the story or something that happened before the story.

fable: a fable is a type of story that is like a folklore and legends that teaches a morale.

foreshadowing: this is where the author gives hints and clues to show what will happen later.

free-verse: these are poems without any particular styles but usually holds rhymes and things that helps it become recognized as a poem.

April 7, 2009 word: popping topping chopping mopping lobbing bobbing hopping

April 1, 2009 The word choice I saw was pretty good except few words were worse than the original. But most of all, it was pretty good. I judged Fiona's.

March 31, 2009 1. cheeped---sang 2. genius---ingenious 3. worn out---exhausted 4. bad---terrible 5. place where not a lot of people know about---uncommon areas 6. seemed to be fun---seemed enjoyable 7. do a game---play a game 8. 9. 10.

March 31, 2009 That day ruined my life. Why did it have to be me? I was just living a normal life as a middle school student. I was just walking home that day. Like the usual. Until a truck suddenly zipped past me careless about the packages inside until an unusual box fell out of the truck. As soon as I walked over to see what it was, an armed motorcycle rammed me on the side and I laid there, crippled and unable to do anything. I could barely keep my eyes open but they felt like a mass weight. How could I lift those with my eyes when I can't lift it with my arms? I woke up in the hospital unable to move any parts of my body and still unable to lift the mass weights over my eyes. But at least I felt like I was laying down in a bed with my arms and legs hanging in the air while being held up by something I could not tell since I can't open my eyes. And to think that this all happened because of a single box that just happened to fall out. Now, thanks to that, I have a fear of boxes and walking on the road. All because of that box shaped package that fell out of the truck.

essay:

March 20, 2009 ice cream: the cold frozen treat that hunts down the heat and parties in your mouth. with all those different flavors to satisfy the consumer. chocolate, vanilla, strawberry, banana, caramel, real strawberry......... Just to prepare for scorching summer bread: with their soft and fluffy textures with different kinds of fillings...from fruit to cream to much more. I can't wait to eat them for breakfast. steak: the soft juicy meat with the size filling the whole plate. fragrance and aroma circling your nose. This is what I need to get back in the game.

March 20. 2009 1. I read the article Ann. I would give it a 3 since it was on topic but something seemed to be missing. 2. I read the article Kansas Terror. I would give it a 4 since it was suspenseful and it was on topic throughout the story. But it was bad since it was on third person. 3. I read the article The boy with......I would give it a 5 since even though it was long, she stayed on topic and it was suspenseful.

March 18, 2009 I read Fiona's essay and it wasn't that bad since she used the short words near the and to make the essay more interesting and add more suspense. However, I do not get why it changed from the mother's story into the dad's. So I thought there were parts that was unnecessary.

March 16, 2009 ---writing gym--word choice 1. What could an immature grandfather do in a school? I think that an immature grandfather can do various things in a school. However, I believe that they will all result into embarrassing their grandchild. Since the immature grandfather will do something childish and somethings that seem is only done by other children and not any of the other adults past a certain age. Also there is a high percentage that the grandfather will do something childish that only the children at a younger age would laugh at. So it would result into the grandparent doing and saying improper things within the classroom while all the other adults are quietly and elegantly standing and observing. So an immature grandfather will embarress their grandchild if they are in the school.

2. What could a curious monkey can do in a post office? A curious monkey can do chaotic things in a post office. As for instance, the monkey's curiosity will make it so that the monkey will do something that will abuse or do things that should not be seen or done. The monkey will also be touching, smelling, tasting, hearing, and see everything out of curiosity. So a monkey would only cause mass terror and chaos in a post office.

Friday 13, 2009 something annoying Children. Or the younger students. They became so bold lately. They were thought to do everything amiably but the truth, they are just insolent, mischeveous with their rotund bodies. Just like how they will suddenly turn you into a stupor or somberly mood. There were many times where the lesser grader would suddenly act as if he/she was trying to pick a fight with me then run away pretending to be hurt by us. Or when they would suddenly start to insult us and make fun of us just for their enjoyment. And we were not allowed to even touch them since they will say that we hurt them. These are the reasons why the younger students are annoying.

Robby Hwang five paragraph essay why children drop out of school

There are many reasons why other students drop out of any school. Since it can be problems within or outside school that these students suffer. Since they may suffer from various sources from weather from the family, school, or any other problems they may suffer. Some of them are unreasonable while One of the reasons are that one may have family conflict. Like for instances, a student’s parents may have a divorce which causes the student to suffer from having their family split. Since he will experience how much they fought in order t get to that state which is terrifying. To see to parents fight until one breaks. It is more than anyone can bargain for. The other reasons would be that the student’s parents my have financial problems where they are not able to afford the rent and the student must help the family. Or they are not allowed to afford the fees that the school requires for their activities. The students may be in the situation where they are made fun for not having as much money as the other students. So they wouldn’t be able to stay in the school for financial reasons. The final reason would be that it involves the school. Like how you would be in a situation where you are expelled from school from your mischievous and childish acts. Or you are miserable in school because the other students might tease you and you might become an outcast. So as you see, there are many reasons why, but there are many other things that might have caused the student to quit or drop out of school. Most children would be in the problem where they can get no other assistance from the other students. = =

chapter 8 Q 1. Why was Paquita not concerned with her scratches on her hands? 2. Why did master always send Juan or her mother with Paquita? 3. Why did master draw the rose?

vocabulary 1. maravedis - Spanish money. 2. consternation- amazed or confused 3.

boredom

ingredients a bottle of homework an ounce of math a pinch of school a tablespoon of teachers a big bowl to hold them all a pinch of projects

Directions First, you have to pour in the bottle of homework into the big bowl. Next, you have add an ounce of math and stir them slightly since there’s more coming! Then you add a pinch of school and a tablespoon of finish the dough. After that, you cook in the oven in 365 degrees for 5 minutes. Then, you add a pinch of projects to top it off. That’s how you make an annoying boredom bread.